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05 November 2010 @ 02:04 am
CHEWYSTORIES Dance make believe  
Dance make believe by chewableproseTitle | Dance make believe
Author | chewableprose 
Fandom | The Twilight Saga
Pairing | Edward/Jacob
Rating |
Spoiler warning | If you haven’t read Breaking Dawn and don’t want to know what happens, don’t read my summary or notes for this manip
Ficlet | Having been held in Jacob’s arms as long as he had, when finally the embrace broke, Edward felt unwhole and heavy, as if Jacob’s strong arms were all that could lift his worries from him. For his part Jacob’s spirit seemed much improved, a cheeky, near cocky grin at the knowledge of the extent of Edward’s love for him. He insisted Edward hunt to regain his strength, and even went with him to ensure he did. With fresh blood once again inside him, and his thirst subdued, the hunger he felt for Jacob and his body took all precedence. How bodily he was, the way he breathed through his mouth, as if he needed more air than others, his torso ballooning further with each breath. The way his taut, rustic skin disappeared into his briefs, and the desire Edward felt to follow that skin beneath the waistband. As if he too could read heads, Jacob wet his lips and grinned once more. “You should go,” Edward said abruptly, frightened by how quickly the prospect of sex with Jacob became an obsession for him. Edward took him by the hand and led him downstairs and out of the house, but paused at the drive, realising that Jacob leaving and the loneliness it would bring would be worse. “Did you want me to drive you home?” Edward said. “Why?” Jacob replied with his grin, “it’s quicker to run”. “Very well.” “Thank you,” Jacob said as he turned to run. “What for?” “For loving me.” Thinking on what it’d been like to be held by him, Edward slipped his hands into Jacob’s and said, “there’s so much to love”. With an expression of uncertainty, Jacob said, “you know ever since our first kiss I’ve been having this recurring dream, I’m crashing Bella’s formal, except she’s not here, she never was, and we go together instead, and it’s me you hold, and we dance together under multi-coloured lights.” He looked sad again. “Why don’t we dance now?” Edward said, “we have the stars and the lights from the house, and there’s no one around, we can dance make believe”. Before he could answer, Edward slid his hand around Jacob’s back and pulled him close. When he was human, all boys knew how to dance, and he particularly enjoyed it. And just as Jacob began to relax and settle into their close stance Edward whispered in his ear, “if I could dream, I would dream only of you”. Their lips nearly touching, all that kept them from a kiss was knowing if they did, they wouldn’t be able to stop.
Disclaimer | this is a work of Photoshop manipulation, the author of this work does not, in any way, profit from the work and all creative rights to the characters belong to their original creator(s)


Taylor Lautner as JacobFiclet | Having been held in Jacob’s arms as long as he had, when finally the embrace broke, Edward felt unwhole and heavy, as if Jacob’s strong arms were all that could lift his worries from him. For his part Jacob’s spirit seemed much improved, a cheeky, near cocky grin at the knowledge of the extent of Edward’s love for him. He insisted Edward hunt to regain his strength, and even went with him to ensure he did. With fresh blood once again inside him, and his thirst subdued, the hunger he felt for Jacob and his body took all precedence. How bodily he was, the way he breathed through his mouth, as if he needed more air than others, his torso ballooning further with each breath. Robert Pattinson as EdwardThe way his taut, rustic skin disappeared into his briefs, and the desire Edward felt to follow that skin beneath the waistband. As if he too could read heads, Jacob wet his lips and grinned once more. “You should go,” Edward said abruptly, frightened by how quickly the prospect of sex with Jacob became an obsession for him. Edward took him by the hand and led him downstairs and out of the house, but paused at the drive, realising that Jacob leaving and the loneliness it would bring would be worse. “Did you want me to drive you home?” Edward said. “Why?” Jacob replied with his grin, “it’s quicker to run”. “Very well.” “Thank you,” Jacob said as he turned to run. “What for?” “For loving me.” Thinking on what it’d been like to be held by him, Edward slipped his hands into Jacob’s and said, “there’s so much to love”. Taylor Lautner as JacobWith an expression of uncertainty, Jacob said, “you know ever since our first kiss I’ve been having this recurring dream, I’m crashing Bella’s formal, except she’s not here, she never was, and we go together instead, and it’s me you hold, and we dance together under multi-coloured lights.” He looked sad again. “Why don’t we dance now?” Edward said, “we have the stars and the lights from the house, and there’s no one around, we can dance make believe”. Before he could answer, Edward slid his hand around Jacob’s back and pulled him close. When he was human, all boys knew how to dance, and he particularly enjoyed it. And just as Jacob began to relax and settle into their close stance Edward whispered in his ear, “if I could dream, I would dream only of you”. Their lips nearly touching, all that kept them from a kiss was knowing if they did, they wouldn’t be able to stop.

Near kiss by chewableprose
Notes | From a hugging manip to a dancing manip, the pair are exploring their intimacy one step at a time. With Breaking dawn on its way, and how much time Jacob spends at the Cullen household within it, I was eager to get him there with Edward for this series. This entry was cross-posted to jakeward, twilight_slash, rpattz_taycob, twi_cwc and twilightmanips, which is why it is not friends locked. If you’re visiting from one of these communities and you’d like to see more of my manips, comment on my friends only entry, but be warned, much of my work is sexually explicit.

 
 
Dance make believe by chewableprose
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tomboytoy on November 4th, 2010 04:58 pm (UTC)
Really sweet manip!! Lov the grin on Edward's face. Also considering where he placed his hand, he knows what he is doing and where this dance might lead them to ;-p
chewableprose on November 5th, 2010 12:33 am (UTC)
Thanks Tom. I'm glad you noticed Edward's grin and the placement of his hand and just the direction things are headed in :).
starry_nights88 on November 4th, 2010 06:28 pm (UTC)
My first thought upon seeing the manip was; "snickers* Edward's groping Jacob.

xP I know, I know, I'm a dork. The simplest things amuse me, really.

Once again you did a lovely job with this manip. I love that you kept the canon height difference between the two (the movies didn't even do that >>). I'm loving the build up as well. Most authors would have the two jump in bed with each other after the 'I love you's' were said, but I'm glad to see that you didn't.

I can feel the sexual tension between the two. I can feel the want of a kiss, but the hesitance in getting one because they know they wouldn't be able to stop there. It's self control, man. :) Great job. As always. Can't wait to see more.
chewableprose on November 5th, 2010 12:41 am (UTC)
*Claps hands* yay for your fabulous feedback, and you're absolutely right about the groping part. Both Edward and Jacob are highly instinct-driven, and the sexual tension really is mounting. Considering just how delicious Jacob looks in those shorts (and hence the reference to his briefs in the ficlet) Edward is more than a little excited at the prospect of exploration. And besides, given how firm Jacob is all over, it must feel pretty awesome to hold where Edward is holding, hehe.

I'm glad you appreciate the canon height, because the movies don't maintain it, it can be difficult sometimes to get it right in the manips, so I'm glad it's being recognised.

And I'm so glad you're feeling the sexual tension build up, that's my plan, by the time they jump into bed together it'll be explosive ;o).
seamonkeyz27 on November 4th, 2010 10:36 pm (UTC)
OMG.... that was the best yet. Your words are beautiful. Their love is so... right on. Beautiful work.
chewableprose on November 5th, 2010 12:47 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the words and their love. :o)
mia_dcwut_09 on November 5th, 2010 01:31 am (UTC)
JESUS I JUST DIED AND WENT TO FANGIRL HEAVEN
LOVED IT
chewableprose on November 5th, 2010 01:39 am (UTC)
Hehe, thanks Mia, glad you did.
madigirl210 on November 5th, 2010 02:04 am (UTC)
I have to giggle a little immaturely at the placement of Edward's hands.
But aside from that - your manips are always so flippin amazing! I absolutely love love love the story that you do along with the pictures. It makes the pictures a thousand times more amazing. And they're pretty amazing, as I said :)
chewableprose on November 5th, 2010 02:16 am (UTC)
Hehe, yeah, he is a little frisky in it isn't he? Thanks so much, I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story, and that you think it makes the manips better *blush*. Lots more to come.
gingerberrycat on November 5th, 2010 07:46 pm (UTC)
Just thought i'd mention, your whole fic/art thing really amazes me.
It rounds out the mental picture and allows us to see into the world that's inside your head.
:D
chewableprose on November 6th, 2010 01:49 am (UTC)
It makes me so happy to hear that. That's exactly why I do it, thank you for being so supportive of my efforts ;).
duchesscarml on November 20th, 2010 05:24 am (UTC)
Awww...and who said dreams can't come true??? It may not be exactly the same as Jacob's dream, but this was sweet of Edward to suggest... His romantic side is showing.... :) Great job!! Still loving this!!

Thanks for this! I was going through a withdrawal with no other updates in so long... I think I'm going to have to post mine soon.
chewableprose on November 20th, 2010 08:42 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, thrilled you liked it. And yes, Edward is a romantic at heart, and it's nice to be able to bring that out ;). Not sure if you're aware but there's two more parts after this one that are up :).
imboredrpanyone on June 21st, 2011 04:39 am (UTC)
lost in your words and touched my your picture
Seeing Jacobs lips almost meet edward's lips was like all anyone could ever ask for or need. The true beauty of love, for it does not matter who we are or where we are from. All the matters is that other person making us long for them, becoming the only thing we need to make all our dreams come true, and to fulfill all our desires But in the end its title where fitted its just make Believe that the white demon and the strong brown wolf could become one, in there love and lust letting all the fear of what everyone they know would think get the best of them as they hold back there passion for those eager lustful thoughts that cross there mind. Finally giving in to the groins as they meet and become one. Not just in lust but in pure unadultrated love. A love that needs no understand but just needs to run its course so the two of them can finally express what they really mean to the other.
chewableprose on June 21st, 2011 08:25 am (UTC)
Re: lost in your words and touched my your picture
Glad you liked this one :).
marki_fungi on January 13th, 2013 09:58 pm (UTC)
Hi again,

Another sweet one, almost a hugging but just that little bit more. I like the placement of their hands, obviously they can't keep their hands up. lol.

Especially good work on the setting again, just like the truck manip. Good ficlet too and I'm looking forwards to their progression.

Keep it up.
chewableprose on January 15th, 2013 02:14 am (UTC)
Thank you, yes, I don't think I'd be able to keep my hands up either :).

Glad you're enjoying it.
supahsmith942 on January 3rd, 2014 01:48 am (UTC)
This story is really making me realise how much I dislike Bella as a character... Btw I ship this so much ;)