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01 November 2010 @ 02:01 am
CHEWYSTORIES Hold me  
Hold me by chewableproseTitle | Hold me
Author | chewableprose 
Fandom | The Twilight Saga
Pairing | Edward/Jacob
Rating |
Spoiler warning | If you haven’t read Breaking Dawn and don’t want to know what happens, don’t read my summary or notes for this manip
Ficlet | Once in his room Edward stood at the window looking into the night outside. Jacob arrived at the doorframe a moment later. “Did you want me to leave?” he said. “No, but I understand if you want to,” Edward replied, still unable to look at him. Closing the space between them and raising Edward’s chin so their eyes would meet, he said, “You know, for someone who can read my mind, you really don’t get the way I feel about you.” Turning away, he continued, “Yes, I forgive you. No, I won’t tell Bella. Yes, I love you too, more than I love Bella, more than I love myself.” Putting a shaking hand on Jacob’s bare shoulder, Edward whispered, “Hold me Jake.” Turning faster than human, Jacob wrapped up Edward in his arms, Edward collapsing into his embrace, the arms around him like bed covers. Jacob held him as tight as he dared, breathing in as much of Edward’s sweet scent as his lungs would hold, his lips promising, “I’ve got you” into Edward’s ear. Interlocked and unmoving, Jacob held Edward off his feet so he might weep weightless on his shoulder, his tears sparkling silver and feeling like ice over skin in a heat wave. With a gentle sway, Jacob whispered warm and soothing words, the pair holding each other uninterrupted, Jacob’s stamina allowing the embrace to last while the hours counted by around them.
Disclaimer | this is a work of Photoshop manipulation, the author of this work does not, in any way, profit from the work and all creative rights to the characters belong to their original creator(s)


Taylor Lautner as JacobFiclet | Once in his room Edward stood at the window looking into the night outside. Jacob arrived at the doorframe a moment later. “Did you want me to leave?” he said. “No, but I understand if you want to,” Edward replied, still unable to look at him. Closing the space between them and raising Edward’s chin so their eyes would meet, he said, “You know, for someone who can read my mind, you really don’t get the way I feel about you.” Taylor Lautner as JacobTurning away, he continued, “Yes, I forgive you. No, I won’t tell Bella. Yes, I love you too, more than I love Bella, more than I love myself.” Putting a shaking hand on Jacob’s bare shoulder, Edward whispered, “Hold me Jake.” Turning faster than human, Jacob wrapped up Edward in his arms, Edward collapsing into his embrace, the arms around him like bed covers. Jacob held him as tight as he dared, breathing in as much of Edward’s sweet scent as his lungs would hold, his lips promising, “I’ve got you” into Edward’s ear. Interlocked and unmoving, Jacob held Edward off his feet so he might weep weightless on his shoulder, his tears sparkling silver and feeling like ice over skin in a heat wave. With a gentle sway, Jacob whispered warm and soothing words, the pair holding each other uninterrupted, Jacob’s stamina allowing the embrace to last while the hours counted by around them.

Notes | As this series grows, I’m finding more and more that the manips move within scenes, rather than between them. Hopefully this makes for a richer story. This is my first hugging manip; I feel that hugging manips sometimes carry intimacy better. This entry was cross-posted to jakeward, twilight_slash, rpattz_taycob, twi_cwc and twilightmanips, which is why it is not friends locked. If you’re visiting from one of these communities and you’d like to see more of my manips, comment on my friends only entry, but be warned, much of my work is sexually explicit.

 
 
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duchesscarml on October 31st, 2010 03:43 pm (UTC)
This story is freakin' great!! I'm loving watching Edward fall for Jacob, because thats where he belongs. But I feel sad for them both, because they're hurting but there is no way this will
work without the pain first. And I hate that, but I also
understand. And it won't do any good for me to push Bella off a cliff now... *sigh*
chewableprose on October 31st, 2010 03:49 pm (UTC)
Haha, indeed it won't (it is tempting though). You're right, the pain is inevitable, but will make their eventual happiness all the sweeter. Thanks for tuning in.
mia_dcwut_09 on October 31st, 2010 05:04 pm (UTC)
k so i just squeed and flailed like crazy this is perfect
jesus you kill me with these great mannips and keep making me wish they're actual scenes or at least by an editing system that would allow me to do this wmm sucks for the most part.

once again awesome manip I AWWWWW'D so badly
and I love how you have jacob being the strong one.
chewableprose on October 31st, 2010 05:11 pm (UTC)
*blushes* Thanks Mia, that's exactly the reaction I hope for. I'm so glad you enjoy them, and I too wish they were actual scenes from a movie.

Jacob's always been incredibly strong in my eyes, and I too like the dominant role he falls into. Thanks again for the great feedback.
mia_dcwut_09 on October 31st, 2010 05:21 pm (UTC)
no problem not to mention the awesome Jacob back!porn we get
chewableprose on October 31st, 2010 05:36 pm (UTC)
Oh I know, the things that boy's back muscles do to me ... hehe.
mia_dcwut_09 on October 31st, 2010 06:47 pm (UTC)
tell me about I live in a coed dorm so I get a good amount of shirtless guys
tomboytoy on October 31st, 2010 05:44 pm (UTC)
That's a very sweet hugging manip very nicely executed.

The hug is a great choice for this story, it's a step in intimacy that they need; plus a hug translate way more the confidence you may have in someone than a kiss do -at least that's my opinion-.
chewableprose on November 1st, 2010 01:51 am (UTC)
Thanks Tom, I agree, a hug can be much more intimate, and was an important piece to this story. I'm so glad you like it.
wirrrn on October 31st, 2010 05:55 pm (UTC)

Awesome manip and awesome story to go therewith. I'm hoping for something large and fridge-shaped to fall on Bella so they boys don't have to deal with Her Whineness when she finds out ;)

Happy Halloween!
chewableprose on November 1st, 2010 01:53 am (UTC)
Haha, indeed, that would solve all their problems :). I'm glad you like it, and the story. Hehe, love your icon, Freddy's such a legend.
starry_nights88 on October 31st, 2010 06:18 pm (UTC)
Oh my! That manip turned out really well! I'd imagine hugging could go horribly, horribly wrong! This, however, worked out really well! :)

The story is moving along wonderfully and still I find myself amazed that you fit these manips into the story, or write the story around the manips. It really improves the story...makes it...richer, better. *nods*

Great job~! ♥
chewableprose on November 1st, 2010 01:57 am (UTC)
*blushes* Thanks so much. Yes, hugging manips can go horribly wrong, and bring with them unique challenges, so I'm thrilled this one works for you. Thanks, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story (and that you feel the image/story pair makes it richer *double blush*), because there's still so much to explore, and I'm having such fun doing it.
starry_nights88 on November 1st, 2010 02:55 am (UTC)
Manips for me, in general, go horribly wrong. But, then again, I'm still a graphics noob. xP

I'm really interested to know how you pick out each manip...I mean, do you pick one out from the story itself? Or do you write the story around the manip you've chosen to do?

Because I'd imagine there's a lot of scenes you could create manips for, so...how do you choose what to do and what not to do.

this may be out in left field, but since I'm helping to run it, I thought I'd ask...have you considered making manips for twilightbigbang? I'm pretty sure artists (and writers for that matter) are still being accepted and I know for a fact there are A LOT of scenes left to have art created for them. If you want more information, let me know, kay?
chewableprose on November 1st, 2010 05:59 am (UTC)
It's amazing how much you improve with practice, I guess that's part of the fun too. It really is an organic process, I have the story in my head and when I write a 'scene' think of a moment that would capture the essence of that scene, and that becomes the manip. So as per what does and does not end up being made, it all depends on the story I want to tell ... It's exciting actually, because each manip ends up a surprise.

I would love to make manips for BigBang, but have to confess that I don't know much about what's involved (I read though your About, but couldn't access the answers for the FAQ). Would love more info, do you know if there's any Edward/Jacob scenes left?
starry_nights88 on November 1st, 2010 05:20 pm (UTC)
I fiddle in photoshop when I'm bored or not inspired to write, but I'm a writer first and foremost. I think my fans would kill me if I started worrying more about graphics and stuff. xP

I'm not completely sure what's all left scene wise, but I do know that my cowrite for the big bang is virtually untouched as far as art goes (my partner and I started late and have two months to get out the 16K word count), it's JacobEdwardSeth (and smutty as hell xP).

If you want a full list of the remaining scenes, I can email the head of the Big Bang and ask her to send me a list over and then I can email it to you. As for more info...I honestly don't have the slightest clue, I'm just here for the more...techinal aspect of running a community and taking over when the other mod can't run it.

Contact yenny2206 and tell her that I sent you over. She'll tell you all that you need to know. She's in school right now and won't be able to get back to you until really late tonight. :)
madigirl210 on October 31st, 2010 07:02 pm (UTC)
Amazing! I can't seem to get enough of this story or the manips that go along with it. I love how you're always able to convey SO much emotion from their stances!
chewableprose on November 1st, 2010 02:00 am (UTC)
Thank you, I'm so glad you feel that way. It's comments like this that make me want to make many many more parts for this series.
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chewableprose on November 29th, 2010 08:01 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, I'm glad.
imboredrpanyone on June 17th, 2011 04:03 pm (UTC)
I can see anything from 2010 :)
This is so beautiful and touching and there are times like a long hug just as much as a tender kiss. There is just something about a guy hugging you when hes ripped and strong that just makes you feel so safe like there is nothing in this world that could hurt you. And that nothing could ever go wrong. And its in that hug that you know you will be okay, and you know that you will be complete with him and that he can give you all that you need. Your so amazing to me the way you express yourself fuck if your guy I think you kinda give me hope I would have gave anything to find a guy that could love the way edward does.
chewableprose on June 17th, 2011 04:41 pm (UTC)
Re: I can see anything from 2010 :)
I completely agree, thanks for your great comment.
imboredrpanyone on June 21st, 2011 04:30 am (UTC)
Re: I can see anything from 2010 :)
on no thanks for great makes me dream that some day a drunken off set video just might come out . We can always dream right.
marki_fungi on January 13th, 2013 03:28 am (UTC)
I like it and you're right, hugging manips carry a lot of weight and this one is incredibly good. I love how they are perfectly suited to holding one another up, it's not the impression you get when Bella is involved.

Great work but for tonight I'm afraid I can't post any more comments. I'll try to get back to you soon.

Keep it up and stay safe.
chewableprose on January 13th, 2013 09:20 am (UTC)
You've done great. Thank you for the comments so far. And as I've said before, love revisiting my work with you. Until next time.
wttr_speak77 on October 21st, 2013 05:39 pm (UTC)
They turn me on so bad
chewableprose on October 27th, 2013 09:00 am (UTC)
Me too.
supahsmith942 on January 3rd, 2014 01:46 am (UTC)
I love how they actually have feelings for eachother and how that is explored within the story