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28 September 2010 @ 08:28 pm
CHEWYSTORIES In the rain  
In the rain by chewableproseTitle | In the rain
Author | chewableprose 
Fandom | The Twilight Saga
Pairing | Edward/Jacob
Rating |
Spoiler warning | If you haven’t read Breaking Dawn and don’t want to know what happens, don’t read my summary or notes for this manip
Ficlet | A week had passed since their kiss in the meadow, and still Edward couldn’t shake the thought of Jacob. Of course it helped nothing that Jacob had been entering his mind with such frequency since then, running in the woods by the house, close enough that Edward could hear his thoughts: a continual calling for Edward to join him. “You know you want to,” he’d say, followed by what he’d do to him if Edward would just let him. Intimate deeds that came over and over, in and out of his mind, more explicit each time; “it must be the animal in him,” Edward mumbled, a thought that brought with it an image of Jacob on all-fours, which only excited him further. The things Edward could see in that dog’s mind; they brought colour to his cheeks and made him thankful that Alice’s particular skills were blocked in this instance. Edward knew it couldn’t continue though, knew that it had to stop before Bella returned with his child. And so he went out into the woods and found Jacob, although hadn’t expected to feel so excited by the prospect. And while he did what he set out to do — he told the dog to leave — somehow his resolve to end it was lost when they were together again. Jacob’s near naked body dripping, his breath fast and marked by the air, his torso all muscle and so hot that rain rose from it in a gentle steam that made Edward desperate to touch him.
Disclaimer | this is a work of Photoshop manipulation, the author of this work does not, in any way, profit from the work and all creative rights to the characters belong to their original creator(s)


Robert Pattinson as EdwardRobert Pattinson as EdwardFiclet | A week had passed since their kiss in the meadow, and still Edward couldn’t shake the memory of Jacob. Of course it helped nothing that Jacob had been entering his mind with such frequency since then, running in the woods by the house, close enough that Edward could hear his thoughts: a continual calling for Edward to join him. “You know you want to,” he’d say, followed by what he’d do to him if Edward would just let him. Intimate deeds that came over and over, in and out of his mind, more explicit each time; “it must be the animal in him,” Edward mumbled, a thought that brought with it an image of Jacob on all-fours, which only excited him further. The things Edward could see in that dog’s mind; they brought colour to his cheeks and made him thankful that Alice’s particular skills were blocked in this instance. Edward knew it couldn’t continue though, knew that it had to stop before Bella returned with his child. And so he went out into the woods and found Jacob, although hadn’t expected to feel so excited by the prospect. And while he did what he set out to do — he told the dog to leave — somehow his resolve to end it was lost when they were together again. Jacob’s near naked body dripping, his breath fast and marked by the air, his torso all muscle and so hot that rain rose from it in a gentle steam that made Edward desperate to touch him.

Notes | The next image in my Edward/Jacob series, here Edward is struggling with the guilt he feels over that kiss in the meadow, as Jacob pursues him relentlessly. I had actually created an image before this one, but realised that it comes much too late in the story I want to tell, so have salted that away. I hope you like it, it’s mostly implied eroticism that relies a lot on your imagination. This entry was cross-posted to jakeward, twilight_slash, rpattz_taycob, twi_cwc and twilightmanips, which is why it is not friends locked. If you’re visiting from one of these communities and you’d like to see more of my manips, comment on my friends only entry, but be warned, much of my work is sexually explicit.

 
 
In the rain by chewableprose
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mia_dcwut_09 on September 28th, 2010 03:13 pm (UTC)
whooo is alli have to say
this made my scray morning so much better :D *hugs*
chewableprose on September 29th, 2010 03:46 am (UTC)
Yay, I'm so glad. Nothing like a bit of Jakeward to brighten a day, thank you for commenting.
starry_nights88 on September 28th, 2010 04:10 pm (UTC)
I love how you're telling a story through your manips. That alone takes talent. Nevermind about making the pictures. lol. Great job! ♥
chewableprose on September 29th, 2010 03:49 am (UTC)
*Blushes* thanks so much, it's really nice to know that it's appreciated. And thanks for the add, am looking forward to checking out your fics (another great icon you have there, hehe) and I have many many more installments planned for this jakeward story.
natasja92 on September 28th, 2010 04:15 pm (UTC)
Yeeyz I love it XD can't wait to see more if this ;)
chewableprose on September 29th, 2010 03:52 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, well there's lots more coming, so stay tuned ;).
wirrrn on September 28th, 2010 04:59 pm (UTC)

Awesome manip! Love the little ficlet that goes with it too! Looking forward to more...
chewableprose on September 29th, 2010 03:57 am (UTC)
I'm thrilled you like the ficlet. For me manips have always been slices of stories part of a wider narrative you often don't see, so I'm glad that my attempts at filling the gaps between these manips is working :). Many more to come.
tomboytoy on September 28th, 2010 05:54 pm (UTC)
Great one!! Edward might look a little pale there but hey, he is a vampire after all !! lol

ps: nice work on the look they are exchanging ;-)
chewableprose on September 29th, 2010 04:01 am (UTC)
Thanks Tom, haha, indeed. I must admit though, one of the reasons I love this pairing is the differences between them, they're like ying and yang, in many ways, not just skin tone. Yes, there's a lot in a look :). As always, thanks for your fabulous feedback.
madigirl210 on September 29th, 2010 01:15 am (UTC)
I love the anguish on Edward's face. It makes the image even more amazing.
chewableprose on September 29th, 2010 04:02 am (UTC)
Thanks so much. Yes, poor guy, he really is burdened by his desires, I'm glad you read that from the image, and thanks for saying such nice things :).
seamonkeyz27 on September 29th, 2010 01:21 am (UTC)
This is awesome!! Love it!
chewableprose on September 29th, 2010 04:03 am (UTC)
Many thanks, and many more to come :).
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chewableprose on December 18th, 2011 02:50 am (UTC)
Thank you, am glad you enjoyed it.

I've added you, so you'll be able to see my friends only manips now. I hope you enjoy your stay and please keep commenting :).
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chewableprose on December 18th, 2011 04:40 am (UTC)
Re: Friendship
You're very welcome Tom, have a great Christmas. Joe.
marki_fungi on January 13th, 2013 02:48 am (UTC)
Very nice, another good relationship builder. I'm looking forwards to more. Let's hope for Edward's sanity in this one that Jacob remembered to pull on his shorts when Edward came out to talk to him. lol
chewableprose on January 13th, 2013 09:08 am (UTC)
Haha ... indeed ;).
supahsmith942 on January 3rd, 2014 01:37 am (UTC)
Love the ficlet and the image just make me think how Jacob would feel, being not only rejected by Bella but now Edward as well.