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22 September 2010 @ 10:09 pm
CHEWYSTORIES In the meadow  
In the meadow by chewableproseTitle | In the meadow
Author | chewableprose 
Fandom | The Twilight Saga
Pairing | Edward/Jacob
Rating |
Spoiler warning | If you haven’t read Breaking Dawn and don’t want to know what happens, don’t read my summary or notes for this manip
Ficlet | Edward was alone in the meadow, thinking of Bella — worrying about her and whether she was safe — and wishing he’d insisted on going with her to visit her mother (she was a newborn after all). When he smelt dog through the trees, he knew it was Jacob watching him. While the mutt had always kept close tabs on his movements, the ‘dogging’ had been particularly intense since Bella left with their child. He entered the clearing and went up to where Edward lay. Edward felt angry at the intrusion onto his and Bella’s almost sacred place. But Jacob’s thoughts stopped him from lashing out. They were warm and tender and filled with longing, but it wasn’t a longing for Renesmee. And then Jacob was kissing him. As much as Edward knew he should push away, having those hot lips pressed against his cold flesh it dawned on him who Jacob was: a person with a soul who he could lose control with — with whom his passion would not need to feel bounded by a fear of hurting someone — and it made him long in return, long to lose himself in a kiss in the meadow.
Disclaimer | this is a work of Photoshop manipulation, the author of this work does not, in any way, profit from the work and all creative rights to the characters belong to their original creator(s)


Taylor Lautner as JacobFiclet | Edward was alone in the meadow, thinking of Bella — worrying about her and whether she was safe — and wishing he’d insisted on going with her to visit her mother (she was a newborn after all). When he smelt dog through the trees, he knew it was Jacob watching him. While the mutt had always kept close tabs on his movements, the ‘dogging’ had been particularly intense since Bella left with their child. He entered the clearing and went up to where Edward lay. Edward felt angry at the intrusion onto his and Bella’s almost sacred place. But Jacob’s thoughts stopped him from lashing out. They were warm and tender and filled with longing, but it wasn’t a longing for Renesmee. And then Jacob was kissing him. As much as Edward knew he should push away, having those hot lips pressed against his cold flesh it dawned on him who Jacob was: a person with a soul who he could lose control with — with whom his passion would not need to feel bounded by a fear of hurting someone — and it made him long in return, long to lose himself in a kiss in the meadow.

Robert Pattinson as EdwardNotes | With a warm, breakable and blood-filled Bella — which let’s face it, is what Edward really wants — Edward can never lose control. But with Jacob, no matter how rough the passion gets, he’ll heal in no time — that’s the ‘nature of the beast’, so to speak. This is the first of a series of Edward/Jacob manips set post-Breaking Dawn that tell a ‘what if’ story. What if Jacob imprinted on Edward, and what if, after Bella becomes a vampire, Edward realises that what he loved about her died when she did. You’ll notice that these are non-explicit images, a change I thought suited the romance of the story I want to tell (but never fear, vivid consummation of their love is a promise). While this story will be very difficult for Edward, I consider Edward’s desire for Bella to have always been instinctual (it was the scent of her blood that obsessed him, without it she’s just another pale, soulless vampire), before he smelt her, she did not interest him (except via her ability to block his abilities). As per Jacob imprinting on Renesmee, what can I say, it was a puppy infatuation (and a bit ridiculous anyway). This entry was cross-posted to jakeward, twilight_slash, rpattz_taycob, twi_cwc and twilightmanips, which is why it is not friends locked. If you’re visiting from one of these communities and you’d like to see more of my manips, comment on my friends only entry, but be warned, much of my work is sexually explicit.

 
 
In the meadow by chewableprose
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mia_dcwut_09 on September 22nd, 2010 05:27 pm (UTC)
aww this is beautiful I love it
saving it

you should cross post this on the comm I mod twi_cwc
chewableprose on September 22nd, 2010 05:46 pm (UTC)
*blushes* thank you so much, that's so sweet. And thank you for the heads up about your community, *runs over to join and cross post*. AND for saving it, I'm thrilled the boys have found a good home ;o). Many more to come from this series.
mia_dcwut_09 on September 22nd, 2010 05:53 pm (UTC)
Can't wait to see more.
tomboytoy on September 23rd, 2010 11:24 am (UTC)
This is a really great job!!
I've never tried kissing manips cause I always though it was a very difficult kind of manip to do (way more than the sex ones) so congrats to you for achieving a very pretty one.

If you allow me a tiny remark though, I think Edward seems to be a bit "out of it", I mean Jacob got his eyes almost closed, ready to go for it and Edward looks a bit like a statue which actually fits the character but not your summary. Anyhow, this is just my two cent on it and it doesn't take away any of the work you've done and that you should be proud of.

Take care

Tom
chewableprose on September 23rd, 2010 11:38 am (UTC)
Thanks Tom, I really appreciate the feedback (how did your job hunt go?). For me Edward's expression reflects the guilt he feels over desiring Jacob so much, and his sad resign to the longing of Jacob. But it's a good point, and the follow up manip includes a much more into it Edward, hehe.
tomboytoy on September 23rd, 2010 01:22 pm (UTC)
Then I can't wait to see what's coming next ;-p

About my job hunt, not so mch luck unfortunately :-( and I've got to admit it kinda depress me...
chewableprose on September 23rd, 2010 01:40 pm (UTC)
I'm sorry to hear that ... don't let it get you down too much, I'm told that things are pretty rough employment wise in lots of industries right now. What kind of job are you in the market for?

Yeah, poor Edward feels such responsibility to his wife and child, after all, Bella did die to be with him. But love is love, and there ain't no changing it *hopeless romantic sigh* haha.

Edited at 2010-09-23 01:41 pm (UTC)
tomboytoy on September 23rd, 2010 02:41 pm (UTC)
Thanks.
I'm looking for a job in communications / advertising where I could use my graphic skills.
duchesscarml on September 23rd, 2010 10:18 pm (UTC)
Oh this is lovely!! I definitely want to see more of your work! My world is all about Jakeward - for me, sadly because I like her, Renesmee doesn't exist. Well I must go find that friends only entry...
chewableprose on September 24th, 2010 04:48 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you like it and that you want to see more. I know what you mean, I adore jakeward. Well, given that this will be a series, and that Renesmee exists in the summery I've given it, I might just have to work her in somehow, weekend visits from daddy and Jake might be cute.
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chewableprose on September 25th, 2010 04:33 am (UTC)
Thanks Jace, I was trying something different with this manip, it brought its own set of challenges, but I'm really glad I did it, it makes me want to do more.

As per the Twilight font (which is Zephyr) ... a lot of sites are being forced to remove their download links because of copyright, but I think these two place should still work:

http://runswithvamps.deviantart.com/art/Twilight-Zephyr-Font-115311388
http://www.mediafire.com/?1xnxjuwdzge

Can't wait to see your new manip.

Joe.
chewableprose on September 25th, 2010 04:35 am (UTC)
I just tried the first link and it works a treat :).
bese_ss_en on September 27th, 2010 10:04 am (UTC)
This work is beautiful. May i repost it in my community http://www.diary.ru/~Twilight-Slash/ ?
chewableprose on September 27th, 2010 10:59 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, I'm so glad you like it. Sure thing, repost away :).
olol123 on November 1st, 2010 06:12 pm (UTC)
I want to see more :p
chewableprose on November 1st, 2010 09:22 pm (UTC)
Lots more to come :)
scooterdamej on August 4th, 2012 05:35 am (UTC)
O.I.C.
Thanks for sending me the link, no wonder I never saw this 1... It's not Rude!
Also probably posted well before I obsessively viewed every up-date to the site.
BTW: I LOVE this! The coloring is exquisite (spell check broken... Fingers crossed).
I especially love the play of light on Edward making him look slightly other-worldly without the stupid *Sparkle Sparkle*... He almost seems Fae rather than Vampyre here.
Well Done You
Me
chewableprose on August 9th, 2012 07:19 am (UTC)
Re: O.I.C.
Thank you, I always love your comments, and it's nice to have one appearing this far back ;). Thank you for all the lovely things you said, this manip is pretty special, it pretty much marked the beginnings of my movement into manips, so it means the world to me to know that it's stood the test of time. And thank you for noticing the colouring and lighting, worked particularly hard on that. :). This series all began with this.
marki_fungi on January 13th, 2013 02:41 am (UTC)
Very sweet. And I don't blame you for wanting to create a relationship before moving straight onto the explicit stuff. It creates more depth and tells all of us exactly who you want to make Edward and Jacob.

I think the addition of clothes in this manip makes it all the better because of it's innocence. It's their moment of realisation and it's the lead up to the kiss that is the most intense moment... I think I heard that in "How I met your mother."

Anyway, excellent manip and ficlet as always and I look forwards to following this storyline.
chewableprose on January 13th, 2013 09:07 am (UTC)
Thanks. Yes, clothes felt right for this pairing. I really wanted to engage with the dilemma of Bella for them both.
supahsmith942 on January 3rd, 2014 01:34 am (UTC)
This is actually a really cute ficlet :)