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31 August 2014 @ 12:14 am
CHEWYSTORIES Doing the rounds with brother  
 
DOING THE ROUNDS WITH BROTHER

   NORMAN / DYLAN 


CHEWYSTORIES, the mainstay of this journal. Here I couple manips with ficlets to tell an ongoing 
narrative. This has always set chewableprose apart as a place where you can find porn 
accompanied by prose. The result being a more meaningful and believable slash fantasy, enjoy.






Notes | Norman's journal design by Caroline Grimprel. This entry is public as per my new open access policy.






Click to enlarge, comments are .

CHEWYCOMPETITION: THE GOLDENCHEWY 


The GoldenChewy is an annual prize that reaffirms my commitment to fostering a better comment culture on this journal. It is awarded to the user with the most Best ChewyStories Comment wins in the year.

The user who leaves the best comment on a chewystories post will have the opportunity to request one manip (posted prior to my open access policy) they would like made public. In order to be in the running you must be a chewyresident and have posted your comment on the chewystories entry before I publish a new chewystories post, on which the winner will be announced and invited to choose one manip to make public. If there are no outstanding comments, no winner will be chosen.

On the anniversary of this journal (9 January), the user with the most 'wins' of that year will be invited to request a manip of their very own. Not only will I create a slash manip of your choosing (with any two characters from any fandom you desire), but you will also receive the hi-res file of your manip (and be the only one other than myself who will have it). Hopefully this will encourage more of you to comment more generously. Let the feedback begin.

And the Best ChewyStories Comment for the last chewystories post goes to action03 (tally: 2) for this comment. Keep up the effort everyone, because the final prize is pretty special (and because it shows me how much you appreciate the effort I put into creating and sharing my manips).
 
 
 
winterfell01 on August 30th, 2014 02:41 pm (UTC)
Oh wow this is really good. Love the diary entires with it and the manip is amazing. Keep up the work
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:44 am (UTC)
Thank you, will do.
the_fool777 on August 30th, 2014 02:43 pm (UTC)
OMG your fake blew my mind!!!!
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:44 am (UTC)
Glad you enjoyed it :).
braydenjc on August 30th, 2014 03:30 pm (UTC)
Great work as usual! This fake is super hot!
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:44 am (UTC)
Cheers.
lightofaman on August 30th, 2014 05:04 pm (UTC)
This is mega level hot. I love it
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:45 am (UTC)
Glad you like it.
endless_paths on August 30th, 2014 05:10 pm (UTC)
Very nicely done like the diary only ever scene the 1st two episode wish I saw more
Never scene his brother in it
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:45 am (UTC)
You should watch more. It's a great show.
xander_e_mage on August 30th, 2014 11:06 pm (UTC)
Great Work. You make some of the most flawless manips I have ever seen. I'm always looking forward to see new work from you.
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:45 am (UTC)
I really appreciate you saying that. Thank you.
ps1on1c on August 31st, 2014 03:19 am (UTC)
Would like to stay at this motel if this was on the room service
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:46 am (UTC)
Me too :).
wishfulcelebfak on August 31st, 2014 03:21 am (UTC)
thats very adventurous of them to fuck outdoors!
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:46 am (UTC)
Well, we all go a little mad sometimes.
wishfulcelebfak on September 1st, 2014 05:46 am (UTC)
lol thats what they say on the show right?
chewableprose on September 2nd, 2014 06:11 am (UTC)
It's probably Norman's most famous line from Hitchcock's Psycho. That and 'A boy's best friend is his mother.'

Hehe, me thinks Norman may have a new best friend ;P.
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chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:46 am (UTC)
My pleasure, glad you enjoyed it.
denniszanderink on August 31st, 2014 10:18 am (UTC)
HOT!!!!
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:47 am (UTC)
Thanks
koshweasley on August 31st, 2014 12:01 pm (UTC)
I love the journal entries, and of course the last. That is a fantastic position, and out in the open like that, how kinky.
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:47 am (UTC)
Glad you like it Kosh :).
jim854 on August 31st, 2014 03:05 pm (UTC)
I love the effects on the diary! Amazing. And that fake is outstanding.
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:47 am (UTC)
Thanks so much.
anonymous4987 on September 1st, 2014 01:04 am (UTC)
Gorgeous as always
chewableprose on September 1st, 2014 04:47 am (UTC)
Thanks so much :).
momo9624 on September 1st, 2014 11:08 pm (UTC)
This is so sexy, i love your work ;)
chewableprose on September 2nd, 2014 06:08 am (UTC)
Thanks so much. I appreciate the comment.
tomboytoy on September 4th, 2014 06:12 am (UTC)
Once again JOe, great work!! This fandom really seems to inspire you great pieces. The text especially was really hot, love that discovery from Norman you're depicting. One tiny thing I noticed though and it's not that big of a deal but, I noticed that the action take place in a room in your text whereas your fake take place outside which (and it's probably only me) take a bit away from the hotness of the piece you wrote, seeing the room a bit messy would have in my opinion added to the "roughness of the encounter" ;).

It's still a nice hot piece though ;)
chewableprose on September 4th, 2014 07:52 am (UTC)
Thanks Tom, glad you enjoyed this. As per the continuity, read again, I do move them outside ;):

'he took me in his arms and bounced me around the room until we burst from it and into the carpark.'
tomboytoy on September 4th, 2014 09:01 am (UTC)
Lol I read it as "... until we "exploded" (burst in the text) from it into the carpet (instead of carpark) lol
strosselmunk on September 4th, 2014 09:59 am (UTC)
It looks so gorgeous. Such hot men there. I really like the way you did this. It looks great and very well put together!

Class A work! And I wouldn't mind taking a ride myself ;)
chewableprose on September 8th, 2014 07:08 am (UTC)
Thank you, you're very kind. Yes, it does look fun doesn't it? Perhaps I could make it a ticketed attraction ;).
action03 on September 4th, 2014 09:35 pm (UTC)
I really love this series and this is another excellent post!!!

I love the diary entries you create which prelude the fake! Especially because this time it's actually two diary entries which show Norman's building lust for Dylan.

Specifically, it is masterful how you incorporated the idea of Dylan as Norman's "father figure", since Norman is essentially fatherless. I think it adds to his confused lust that Dylan fills a role in his life that has been empty since his father died. It's incest, but Norman's confused psyche make it seem less taboo. It's almost sweet (in a twisted way) how he really needs someone to be that father figure in his life. Talk about daddy issues lol...

And of course the fake itself is wonderful! Dylan holding Norman while fucking him is so perfect because Norman needs a man to make him feel submissive.

One thing I noticed is that in the diary entry it said they went out into the "twilight", but it appears to be daytime in the fake. Obviously this is not a huge deal and the fake is still excellent, but it is a little missed detail.

Keep up the fantastic work Chewy! Looking forward to next month's post!
chewableprose on September 8th, 2014 07:14 am (UTC)
Thanks Action for yet another stellar comment.

I really enjoy Dylan and Norman's relationship for precisely that reason, because of his psyche. And in the show, when Dylan tries to get Norman to leave Norma and live with him, he takes on that father role (not to mention all the shit Dylan puts up with). All this combined with the canon mummy issues of the series meant I just couldn't resist exploring that missing father transference onto his hunky older brother. And the journal, stream of consciousness form seemed the perfect way to do that. So really glad it seems to have been effective.

Yes, I actually thought a bit about the twilight detail. Clearly it's set in the dying hours of the day (sky darkening, lights going on), and I guess it get seemed like the best way to describe the transition from day to night. But perhaps there's a more appropriate descriptor.

Thanks for the feedback :).
sexymenlover005 on November 13th, 2014 06:17 pm (UTC)

Hot 🔥🔥

chewableprose on October 31st, 2015 03:23 am (UTC)
Thanks :)
bolintime on June 11th, 2015 03:39 pm (UTC)
i need more dylan manips in my life. :D
chewableprose on October 31st, 2015 03:24 am (UTC)
Don't we all :)
starchaser9 on October 23rd, 2015 02:04 am (UTC)
I just started season 2. Love the show and the actors especially Freddie Highmoore wish they would twist the story line and turn this dream you created into an actual thing
chewableprose on October 31st, 2015 03:24 am (UTC)
It's a great show. And yes, I'd love to see my fantasies come to life.