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14 November 2013 @ 10:42 pm
CHEWYSTORIES The boy needs discipline  
 
THE BOY NEEDS DISCIPLINE

   MERLIN / ARTHUR 



CHEWYSTORIES, the mainstay of this journal. Here I couple manips with ficlets to tell an ongoing 
narrative. This has always set chewableprose apart as a place where you can find porn 
accompanied by prose. The result being a more meaningful and believable slash fantasy, enjoy.





Ficlet | As soon as he had finished fisting Merlin Arthur regretted it, he wasn't sure what had come over him, what had possessed him to pull on his glove and bury his forearm in his manservant. If things weren't strange before, they were sure to become so now. Not particularly wishing to deal with it, Arthur left Merlin in the castle dungeons. Just for a day or two he told himself, just until things became less strange between them and Merlin's whining about how Arthur had hurt him died down a bit. 'Is your bottom sore?' Arthur would tease when he visited Merlin in his cell. 'It's not as fat as yours,' he replied. It almost seemed like Merlin relished in his master's discomfort over the extreme act of intimacy. He would roll on the floor and wriggle his butt in Arthur's direction. 'Get up, stop that,' Arthur said with whispered agitation, 'or you'll force me to punish you again.' The guards giving him awkward sideward glances, Arthur turned to leave. 'You don't have it in you,' Merlin baited beneath his breath. This stopped Arthur, who then dismissed the guards, opened the cell and led a limping Merlin by the elbow to a more private holding room. 'Right Merlin, for that, I am going to have to punish you again.' Arthur stripped him naked, bound his wrists with rope, unbuckled his breeches and slid his cock inside Merlin's hole, which was still a little red, and no doubt sore, but oddly accommodating to Arthur's cock. And sure Merlin fought against the rope that bound his wrists, but it seemed to be in the direction of Arthur, so as to lower himself onto him, and allow Arthur's cock deeper inside. And all this Merlin did with a delighted grin. Confused, Arthur begun to suspect that such a punishment was exactly what Merlin had hoped for. He should withdraw, but was too deep inside Merlin, and too hard and eager for release to have any hope of removing his member from his manservant. So instead, to Merlin's encouragement, he intensified the thrusts. Things between them, it seemed, had indeed changed, and Arthur felt his resolve to fight that tide weaken as Merlin's screams of approval led him to ejaculate, long and deep into the recesses of Merlin.     

Notes | Gifs by Tumblr's historybooks-haveitwrong. This entry is public as per my new open access policy.


 


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CHEWYCOMPETITION: THE GOLDENCHEWY 


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The user who leaves the best comment on a chewystories post will have the opportunity to request one manip (posted prior to my open access policy) they would like made public. In order to be in the running you must be a chewyresident and have posted your comment on the chewystories entry before I publish a new chewystories post, on which the winner will be announced and invited to choose one manip to make public. If there are no outstanding comments, no winner will be chosen.

On the anniversary of this journal (9 January), the user with the most 'wins' of that year will be invited to request a manip of their very own. Not only will I create a slash manip of your choosing (with any two characters from any fandom you desire), but you will also receive the hi-res file of your manip (and be the only one other than myself who will have it). Hopefully this will encourage more of you to comment more generously. Let the feedback begin.

And the Best ChewyStories Comment for the last chewystories post goes to zdae69 (tally: 8) for this comment. Keep up the effort everyone (I'm certainly noticing improvement in feedback, so thanks for that), because the final prize is pretty special.
 
 
 
the_fool777 on November 14th, 2013 11:58 am (UTC)
OMG Thanks so much for the Merlin luv!!!
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:38 am (UTC)
My pleasure, glad you enjoyed it.
manu0489_milan on November 14th, 2013 05:48 pm (UTC)
i love Bradley James as top!!! great fake!
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:39 am (UTC)
So do I, he makes a great top. Thanks for the comment.
sdtechie23 on November 14th, 2013 07:16 pm (UTC)
Thanks again for another hot work. I love it!
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:39 am (UTC)
You're welcome. Thanks for the comment.
drewby101 on November 14th, 2013 08:24 pm (UTC)
Great Work!
Hey chewableprose,
There are only really top 3 fakers on LJ that do the bests job at faking celebs. They are TomBoy, WishfulCelebs and Yourself :)
This image in particular is great. Fantastic headshots to use. I also LOVE the fake that Merlin has a smile on his face cause he loves it and how Arthur has a serious face which is so damn sexy because he in concentrating.
I always love you fakes, they seem more dirty than the others and they seem more lifelike. And I've never watched a single episode of Merlin in my entire life so far, but maybe I might need to.
Your fakes are fanatastic and beauifulfly put together, each couple of days. You do an amazing job without fault! and they are always perfect!
Thanks Drewby

Edited at 2013-11-14 08:25 pm (UTC)
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:43 am (UTC)
Re: Great Work!
Hey Drewby,

Thank you so much, it is an honour to be included in a list with TomBoy and WishfulCelebs, who are both very talented. Thank you for the encouragement and support, it means a lot.

Thrilled you enjoyed this one and the expressions of the boys, which were chosen for the very reasons you identify.

That you find my work lifelike is an incredible compliment, thank you. Keep watching this journal, because I have lots of goodies in store ;).

Chewy.
Re: Great Work! - drewby101 on November 19th, 2013 10:22 am (UTC) (Expand)
owensheart on November 14th, 2013 08:51 pm (UTC)
HMM somehow I think punishment is not the way Merlin sees it, now I know why he is so insolent, just to get more of Arhturs 'punishement'.

Great pic and story, really hot.
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:44 am (UTC)
Thanks Rose, and you're absolutely right. Merlin is getting exactly what he desires most :).
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chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:44 am (UTC)
Thanks so much.
musicislifeyeah on November 15th, 2013 05:12 am (UTC)
Love your Merlin fakes. Love seeing Arthur use Merlin to his full potential.
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:44 am (UTC)
Thank you. I like seeing Arthur use Merlin too :).
ps1on1c on November 15th, 2013 06:56 am (UTC)
Love it
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:45 am (UTC)
I'm glad.
vex47 on November 15th, 2013 06:03 pm (UTC)
Glad to see Arthur giving in to his lust. :) I love these two together.
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:45 am (UTC)
So do I. They make a great couple.
thewizz on November 15th, 2013 07:59 pm (UTC)
nice fuck, but he looks quite happy for getting his punishment
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:46 am (UTC)
Read the ficlet and you'll understand why ;)
tomboytoy on November 16th, 2013 11:20 am (UTC)
As always, great work Joe. The story is really good and hot, it makes me all tingly down there ;) As for the fakes itself well, it's really nice and you picked perfect bodies for the both of them and Merlin certainly seems to enjoy getting filled by his master's juice ;).

ps: that second gif of Merlin's ass: Inviting!! ;)
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:47 am (UTC)
Cheers Tom. It's always nice to know that you like a work. And especially that you find it arousing :).

Glad you like that gif, I agree, very inviting.
wishfulcelebfak on November 16th, 2013 12:13 pm (UTC)
yeah everybody knows merlin is a fucking bitch bottom for arthur and the knights of the round table.

and you know why its a round table? cuz merlin is in the middle and after arthur, the king, they spin him around to the next guy. and all the knights finish with him, merlin is filled with baby batter
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:49 am (UTC)
Ha! I love the way you think. Now I can't get out of my head the image of Merlin on a lazy Susan, being spun by Arthur and his men, each of them making a deposit inside him. A very hot visual, thanks for that ;).
(no subject) - wishfulcelebfak on November 19th, 2013 03:52 pm (UTC) (Expand)
bristol_man on November 17th, 2013 10:34 am (UTC)
That's great, a really hot picture. I'm persevering with 'Atlantis', but it's not a good replacement for Merlin, even though Jason has had his shirt off a couple of times. No slashy dialogue, though in last night's episode the frankly unattractive Hercules was about to kiss Jason - on the cheek, presumably; fortunately, this wasn't shown.
The same pose with pretty-boy Mordred on the receiving end would be super-hot!

Edited at 2013-11-17 10:41 am (UTC)
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:51 am (UTC)
Lol. You are a hard man to please. I'm enjoying Atlantis on the whole. Although am perplexed by the lack of character development (for Jason particularly).

I'll have to revisit Mordred again soon. I do miss Merlin :(.

Thanks for the comment.
handsomeppants on November 17th, 2013 11:12 am (UTC)
It's great to see another wonderful Merthur piece from you, Chewie. You always create such great work. Again, I love the pairing of image and story. They work together so well in this case to build the eroticism. My, that Merlin is a naughty, manipulative scamp. He knows exactly what he wants from Arthur and how to get it. I love that cheeky expression on his face as Arthur drills into him. I wish I was really there to watch it. Looking forward to more. Well done. :)
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:54 am (UTC)
Thanks Pornypants, I always love getting feedback from you. Glad you enjoyed this one. And of course the question on everyone's lips is when we will see a new work from you?
koshweasley on November 17th, 2013 12:15 pm (UTC)
Mmm, a fitting punishment. This is quite delicious. The temperature by the pool just went up here.
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:54 am (UTC)
Haha, thanks Kosh. Glad I could heat things up for you ;).
(no subject) - koshweasley on November 20th, 2013 02:34 am (UTC) (Expand)
snooperhero on November 17th, 2013 05:23 pm (UTC)
love bradley
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 08:55 am (UTC)
Me too :).
heffics on November 19th, 2013 09:11 am (UTC)
that's a great bradley right there <3!
chewableprose on November 19th, 2013 09:23 am (UTC)
He sure is sexy. Glad you enjoyed this.
crazy_p_123 on November 20th, 2013 03:05 pm (UTC)
PLEASE DO FINNICK ODAIR(hunger games) FAKES
cohntrol on November 24th, 2013 03:05 pm (UTC)
Really sexy
chewableprose on December 14th, 2013 01:29 am (UTC)
Cheers.
hugedicklover on November 25th, 2013 01:43 am (UTC)
WOW What an awesome job!
paxart on November 25th, 2013 11:49 pm (UTC)
Fantastic pic! Merlin is just the kind of geek that needs training from a blond hunk!!! I'd let Bradley James do just about anything he wanted with me!
chewableprose on January 11th, 2014 02:19 am (UTC)
Me too :).
endless_paths on November 26th, 2013 12:03 am (UTC)
Nice little story there like how Merlin teased Arthur very Merlin like
Also like the facial expression on Merlin and the hay he got in his hair follows on from 2nd moving image when his head on the ground very nice touch
Great work
chewableprose on January 11th, 2014 02:19 am (UTC)
Thanks for noticing all the details :).
zdae69 on December 4th, 2013 06:38 am (UTC)
Haha! Okay, first of all, the gifs go PERFECTLY with the ficlet. Especially the one of Merlin wiggling his ass! I really love the humor you have put into this one. Like Merlin and Arthur's trade of smart "ass" remarks. I also find it funny to think of what was going through the guards' minds listening in on the conversation! Haha! I'm glad to see that Merlin is finally getting some more Pendragon rod that he so much deserves! (Even if it is a bit more painful from their last venture.) And how, even though he's hesitant, Arthur's lust urges him to continue until the end. So so so HOT!

That's yet another thing I love about your works, Joe. How the sexual actions in the ficlet add even more sexiness to the manip. It's as if the whole ficlet replays in my head as I look at it. And you've once again done a flawless job on this one! I love the look of excitement on Merlin's face. (And you've really pulled that difficult angle off flawlessly.) And Arthur's expression matches up with the ficlet to a tee; pleasure, yet a bit of hesitance.

I'm really looking forward to the next installment! This series will now be even MORE fun to read because *drum roll* I've started Merlin! :D I just finished the episode where Lancelot makes his first appearance. (Five, I think it is.) I absolutely love it! I like how it stays strong on the main plot of each episode and doesn't wander with a bunch of filler. Arthur is probably my favorite, but I really like Lancelot too. (he's so HAWT! I have a thing for long hair... Haha!) Oh! And I love Gwen too! Heck, EVERYBODY.(Except maybe Uther - Mr. Jump-to-Conclusions. But he has his good moments from what I've seen.) Anyway, like I said, I can enjoy the genius in these ficlets even more now! Like the back and fourth you did with Arthur and Merlin; just like they do in the show!

As early as the second episode, when Merlin is dressing Arthur, it's obvious that they make perfect butt buddies! ;)

Thanks for another wonderful installment, and thanks for introducing me to such a wonderful series! (I've been streaming them free at the moment, but I already plan to get the complete series box-set when it releases here in the US.) Aaaand I'm shutting up now! ;P
chewableprose on January 11th, 2014 02:27 am (UTC)
I am so excited that you've started Merlin. It's my favourite show, and it makes me really happy that you'll be able to appreciate my manips even more now. I hope you enjoy the series as much as I did (and there are so many slashy moments ;). I love Lancelot too (can't wait to hear what you think of some of the other characters when they are introduced :).

Thank you for this amazing comment. It makes me so happy to hear that the balance and interaction between the ficlet and manip was effective (and that you found the interactions between them consistent with the show :). Also for appreciating the angle of the manip.

I can't tell you how much your comments fuel my work, they mean so much to me, thank you friend *hugs*.
poseyisagift on December 5th, 2013 05:40 pm (UTC)
I LOVE these ficlets you write with your fakes. The gifs too. They just fuel my very vivid imagination. Those guards were probably wondering if Arthur would let them watch the punishment. Merlin manipulating Arthur to fuck him again was hilarious. Arthur just shoving his cock into him with no actual preparation is actually really hot! The fact that Arthur is too horny to punish Merlin for manipulating him by pulling out and leaving him unsatisfied is also hot.
chewableprose on January 11th, 2014 02:28 am (UTC)
Thank you, I really appreciate that. It's so nice to hear that you enjoy the combination of manip and ficlet, it encourages me to make many more chewystories. Thanks for the support.
nropyug on December 17th, 2013 06:58 pm (UTC)
sooo hot! i love these two
chewableprose on January 11th, 2014 02:29 am (UTC)
Me too. :)