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09 July 2012 @ 06:51 pm
CHEWYSTORIES Moonlit passion  
 
MOONLIT PASSION

   EDWARD CULLEN / JACOB BLACK 



CHEWYSTORIES, the mainstay of this journal. Here I couple manips with ficlets to tell an ongoing 
narrative. This has always set chewableprose apart as a place where you can find porn 
accompanied by prose. The result being a more meaningful and believable slash fantasy, enjoy.



Ficlet | Since arriving on Isle Esme for their honeymoon and getaway from the guilt and anger that waited for them back in Forks, Edward had done all he could to make their time away romantic. But Jacob, it seemed, wasn't the romantic type. Edward wanted love making and meaningful memories that would help subdue the shame he felt for how he had hurt Bella, while Jacob just wanted to fuck and horse around. More specifically, he just wanted to fuck Edward, to pound his ass with all his animalistic might. While Edward enjoyed being dominated by Jacob, opening himself up to him, he couldn't shake the feeling that what they shared was purely physical. That beyond their fleshy pleasure there was little other connection. And this made Edward want to leave, as, while the physicality of their time together had been hot, it had been without meaning, without passion. Edward was beginning to believe he had made a mistake, that what he wanted Jacob couldn't provide. And so he told him he wanted some time apart to think and to be alone, returning to the house to pack.

When all his things were packed and ready, Jacob appeared in the doorway to their room, red-eyed and shoulders slumped. "Please don't leave me," he said. "I will come back," replied Edward, "I just need some time." With this Jacob dropped to his knees and began to cry, "no you won't," he said, "why would you? You'll realise that I can't make you happy." Edward joined him on the floor and dried his cheeks. "Maybe I'm the one who can't make you happy," he said. "Maybe we want different things, that's not your fa-" "I want you," Jacob interrupted. "That's all, it's very simple for me. I know you've been struggling with this, and I haven't helped because I don't know how to. All I can do is try to be positive and hope that you choose me. I'd do anything for you, I love you." Jacob began to tremble, turning away from Edward in shame. Edward took him in his arms and kissed his neck, "where have you been hiding my love?" he whispered in his ear. Then, still tearful, Jacob looked Edward in the eyes and said, "I want you to make love to me, I want you inside me." And they did make love, for what felt like the first time. And it was passionate, and intimate and gentle, warm skin against cool skin, hand-in-hand as Edward guided himself inside Jacob and consummated their affection for each other, their bodies one in the light of the moon.     

Notes | The next installment in this series, it marks a romantic shift in this series (which brings it back to its roots on this journal, as those who followed the early entries will know). Not sure who made the gifs, although the second was modified by me. This entry is public as per my new open access policy.

 


Comments are .


CHEWYCOMPETITION: THE GOLDENCHEWY 


The GoldenChewy is an annual prize that reaffirms my commitment to fostering a better comment culture on this journal. It is awarded to the user with the most Best ChewyStories Comment wins in the year.

The user who leaves the best comment on a chewystories post will have the opportunity to request one manip (posted prior to my open access policy) they would like made public. In order to be in the running you must be a chewyresident and have posted your comment on the chewystories entry before I publish a new chewystories post, on which the winner will be announced and invited to choose one manip to make public. If there are no outstanding comments, no winner will be chosen.

On the anniversary of this journal (9 January), the user with the most 'wins' of that year will be invited to request a manip of their very own. Not only will I create a slash manip of your choosing (with any two characters from any fandom you desire), but you will also receive the hi-res file of your manip (and be the only one other than myself who will have it). Hopefully this will encourage more of you to comment more generously. Let the feedback begin.

And the Best ChewyStories Comment for the last chewystories post goes to imboredrpanyone (tally: 1) for this comment. I really struggled in picking someone this time because there were a couple of standout comments. However I really needed to reward imboredrpanyone for creating a ficlet in response to my post, it made me very happy. Keep up the effort everyone, because the final prize is pretty special.
 
 
 
kolman8 on July 9th, 2012 10:12 am (UTC)
I love that pose you've chosen for them, it merges the loving intimacy and the sexual desire so well. Hand-holdingly hot fucking. :D
I'm just gonna assume there's a big mirror on the 4th wall that Jacob's staring into. Watching himself be fucked by his lover, Edward catching the werewolf's eye at the corner of his gaze as he breaks focus from thrusting. The bright light of the moon reflecting off it, illuminating the scene: tanned wolfskin, pale vampskin, two bodies colliding together.
I'm just loving the whole thing. XD
chewableprose on July 9th, 2012 10:37 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for your fantastic comment. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one and that you like all its romantic elements, like the position and hand-holding, that's totally what I was going for. Thank you for noticing the lighting and skin tone (worked hard on that) and am so pleased that you like the final product.
(no subject) - kolman8 on July 9th, 2012 10:50 am (UTC) (Expand)
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noalla on July 9th, 2012 12:08 pm (UTC)
This is amazing!
chewableprose on July 11th, 2012 12:15 am (UTC)
Thanks.
owensheart on July 9th, 2012 04:20 pm (UTC)
THis was sad but really beautiful and that picture BLOODY BLOOMI'N HOT!
chewableprose on July 11th, 2012 12:16 am (UTC)
With a happy ending :). Thanks Rose, really glad you enjoyed it.
mimibrowinch on July 9th, 2012 06:00 pm (UTC)
I would love to have your talent, you make my dreams come true with your fakes and it's so a good job that I think always it's real
chewableprose on July 11th, 2012 12:18 am (UTC)
Thanks for your kind words, I really appreciate them and am so glad you enjoyed this :).
matt_1215 on July 9th, 2012 06:37 pm (UTC)
I don't like taylor lautner but with your style and your art... I like this post... it's really good...don't influence my emotions LOL
chewableprose on July 11th, 2012 12:20 am (UTC)
Haha ... how can you not like Taylor? He's stunning. Hopefully lots of Taylor porn from me will change your opinion of him :).
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chaddyback on July 9th, 2012 08:55 pm (UTC)
wow thats all i can say.
jacob seem to finaly get the fact that sex is not love. but love can be sex(making love)to final give that up makes it so hot and sexy. the fact there making love on the island in the glow of the moon lit night. very sexy another job well done
chewableprose on July 11th, 2012 12:21 am (UTC)
Thank you, and I like the way you worded that, it is the exact realisation by Jacob I was going for :). Glad you like the setting, I have to say I love Isle Esme.
vodou_blue on July 10th, 2012 04:34 am (UTC)
Yum! Love it!
chewableprose on July 11th, 2012 12:22 am (UTC)
I'm glad :).
darlin43 on July 10th, 2012 12:25 pm (UTC)
I really enjoy your manip, really always, but if you acept a constructive critical, i want to say that, i can´t do anything so hot like this, but i think that jacob is too white not? sorry but is my opinion. Thank for your work, i know that this is really hard, and i allways tell you when i really love, but i think that if i know that you can do it better, because i watch your works, i must tell you.
Sorry, and don´t be angry for this.
chewableprose on July 11th, 2012 12:24 am (UTC)
Thank you. I'm not angry at all, I always appreciate feedback. And perhaps you're right, maybe I should have gone darker with Jacob, it just seemed right when I was making it, particularly with the lighting. I will certainly keep that in mind for my next Jacob manip :).
(no subject) - darlin43 on July 11th, 2012 06:08 am (UTC) (Expand)
scooterdamej on July 10th, 2012 10:58 pm (UTC)
Quick reply
Having technical difficulties with my iPad, I know how to fix it now but it could take me a while & I didn't want you to have to wait for feedback (but I can't write out everything I want to say now in case it crashes again).
Ok, so...
Love the turn in Jacob's character in the story (you know I've been waiting for it for AGES) the best part of it is that it makes total sense WHY he's been that way & why he was scared into the change. No criticism of the Manip today *Gasp*.
Well Done you.
Frantic Me
P.S. Hopefully a more detailed comment 'Ron.
chewableprose on July 11th, 2012 12:30 am (UTC)
Re: Quick reply
Hehe *gasp* no manip criticism today, triumph ;)

Yes it felt good to return Edward and Jacob to their romantic roots, especially considering when I started out making manips of this pair they were almost always PG images as the focus was on the romance and intimacy ... which is what has always attracted me to these two. I'm glad the story made sense too :).

Thanks friend.
strosselmunk on July 10th, 2012 11:07 pm (UTC)
Amazing! :D Love the pairing. Who gives a crap about Bella? ;)
chewableprose on July 11th, 2012 12:30 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, me too :).
damaris4 on July 11th, 2012 01:22 am (UTC)
Amazing as always! love it!
chewableprose on July 13th, 2012 01:19 am (UTC)
Thanks Javier, I appreciate the comment.
lukasz01 on July 11th, 2012 06:40 am (UTC)
loving the manip i really do good job
chewableprose on July 13th, 2012 01:19 am (UTC)
Cheers.
heffics on July 14th, 2012 04:54 am (UTC)
Man you always manage to pick the best bodies >w<~

Great BG too!
chewableprose on July 14th, 2012 06:56 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, I'm thrilled you think so. :). Glad you appreciate the background.
ingrid44 on July 14th, 2012 10:40 pm (UTC)
Nice to see you've returned to my favourite pairing......and to Isle Esme as well. I still remember that ficlet/manip you did when they first arrived on the island.
seems not all has been going well for the honeymooners eh? At least in the end Jacob finally let down his barriers and let Edward in (no pun intended! hehehe)

Again another lovely ficlet to accompany the manip. Turn about is fair play they say eh?
chewableprose on July 15th, 2012 10:37 am (UTC)
You're welcome, prepare yourself for many many more to come. And yes, I too love Isle Esme, it's such a romantic place. And thank you, it's nice to know that my manips/ficlets are memorable (that post is one of my personal favourites).

Yes, there has been a bit of drama between the two recently, but not to fear, I'm sure they'll work it out ;).

Thanks for the support and stay tuned.
(no subject) - chewableprose on July 15th, 2012 10:37 am (UTC) (Expand)
bristol_man on July 15th, 2012 08:51 am (UTC)
Very nicely-composed fake, hot as always. The films were pretty awful, except for the bits where Jacob took off his shirt, but the men were certainly hot (though I'm not too impressed with skinny, pasty Edward - I'll leave him for the ladies).
chewableprose on July 15th, 2012 10:34 am (UTC)
Haha, you really do hate the films don't you? Glad you enjoyed the manip :). Thanks for the nice comment.
xenalaoma on July 18th, 2012 07:48 am (UTC)
Thank you form great manip.
chewableprose on July 21st, 2012 02:00 am (UTC)
You're welcome, thanks for the comment.
tomboytoy on July 21st, 2012 09:57 am (UTC)
Hey Joe.
First, sorry for the delay in answering this post I've been really busy. I've got to say that I love the ficlet that goes with the manip. Great work on the blending and setting however, if I may say so, it doesn't seem to me that the headshots fit the passion of the story. I mean the holding of the hands is great and show the link between those two but their expressions for me don't fit. Jacob doesn't seem lost into it like he should be (the guy doesn't seem in bliss there) and Edward's face is nice but his expression there seems to me like he is fucking Jacob not making love to him like you intend to).

I might seem a bit harsh here cause I know that you've spent hours working on it but I feel like even though it's a great manip from a technical point of view, it doesn't fit the change in your story and I just wanted to let you know (but I insist,it's still a nice manip that shows off you're great skills in term of manipping ;))
chewableprose on July 21st, 2012 10:51 pm (UTC)
Hi Tom,

First, no need to apologise for the delayed reply, it means a lot that you came back and commented. I'm glad that you enjoyed the ficlet that accompanies this manip, and thank you for your nice words about the blending and setting.

As per the expressions, I completely accept your criticism and will keep it in mind in future. For me personally, I'm usually more concerned with the expressions of the two working together (so that they are both thoughtful, or passionate, or intense, or one pained from penetration). This is because of the way I see my manips, which is as a screenshot of a session that would involve a range of expressions, rather than seeking to create a manip that encapsulates the overall mode of the session, if that makes sense? This would be different if I didn't have a ficlet, as then I would need the manip to convey the direction of the story, however what I like about the relationship between the ficlet and manip is that they offer different things. The ficlet provides background and an overall picture, while the manip offers a single moment in the story.

I don't want you to think that I'm being defensive, because I think your criticism is completely legitimate, and perhaps I should be focusing on the manip being more representative of the overall mood in future. Just sharing the rationale behind my practice.

Thanks for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful comment.
zdae69 on July 22nd, 2012 10:36 pm (UTC)
Okay, I have SO many reason to love this installment! First of all, IT'S ANOTHER INSTALLMENT to what is definitely one of my favorite fics ever! Second, with recent events in my life, I can REALLY relate to parts of this one. The part in which Jacob says "I want you!That's all, it's very simple for me. I know you've been struggling with this, and I haven't helped because I don't know how to. All I can do is try to be positive and hope that you choose me. I'd do anything for you, I love you." is very similar to what was said to me by my almost-boyfriend. Of course, the rest turned out differently. But the fact that I could relate to Edward's character, having been put in the same position, makes this installment that more amazing and meaningful to me! This is now, without a doubt, my favorite ficlet of yours; I really adore it!

I also love the hint of mystery it leaves for me personally. I'm left to wonder: "Is Jacob just putting on an act to keep Edward from leaving?! Or does he really mean what he says?! Or a little bit of both?!" (The same wonderment I had in my situation.) This really has me excited for the next installments! *Shakes up and down with excitement!*

Now on to the manip, which is magnificent! You've hit perfection once again, Joe! I really like the luminosity of their skin from the moonlight! And as always, love the romantic setting!
chewableprose on July 26th, 2012 12:38 am (UTC)
Your comment means the world to me Nolan, that my writing was meaningful to you is more than I could ever ask for (especially given how important you are to me). And yes, I must confess, I often write from experience, the ficlet was definitely from my heart.

And I'm thrilled you picked up on the mystery/contradiction of Jacob's behaviour ... in this instance passion took over, but it's certainly something that will be explored in more detail (motivations that is). There's something about this pairing that lends it to drama so nicely.

And I'm so glad you like the manip. Not sure if you've seen Breaking Dawn: Part 1, but Isle Esme is such a magical place, I love having the boys there :).
imboredrpanyone on July 29th, 2012 07:01 pm (UTC)
This is good
You done really awesome on it and it looks very real. I guess am just all about the cock. The only times I want to jack off is when I can see a fat cock just dangling there. But fuck I would give anything to be the top or bottom in this picture and L woods tumblr is gone it got deleted :(
chewableprose on July 31st, 2012 01:16 pm (UTC)
Re: This is good
Haha, yeah, in this you just need to remember that Edward is balls deep in Jacob at this moment which is why you can't see his cock. Thanks for the comment :).
scooterdamej on August 3rd, 2012 06:48 am (UTC)
Woot iPad all fixed!
Ok here we go...
I LOVED seeing Edward as a Top for a change (really, vampire healing may have met it's match in Wolf-shifter monster-cock!)
It was also nice to see Edward displaying the fact that he's like a century older than Jacob, there'd have to be something wrong with BOTH of them if Edward weren't the more emotionally mature partner.
Have you established if Jacob actually IMPRINTED on Edward? Because if he DID then it throws a whole other light on this scene, since in the books Jacob tells Bella that an imprinted wolf BECOMES whatever their imprinted NEEDS them to be at the time.
Like if they imprint on a little girl then they act as a brother/friend without sexual feelings getting involved yet).
Just a thought that Edward would have to be VERY careful not to manipulate Jacob with this power over him.
Anyway, loved it all (especially the skin-tones on the boys & the Isle Esme background)
So Well Done
Damej
chewableprose on August 4th, 2012 04:05 am (UTC)
Re: Woot iPad all fixed!
Thanks so much, thrilled you enjoyed this, and nice to know the setting and skin tone was appreciated. And yes, you're absolutely right about the difference in wisdom between the two, which has certainly been explored in this series.

As per the 'imprinting' trajectory, that began way back here: http://chewableprose.livejournal.com/6884.html#cutid1

As always, thanks for the thoughtful feedback.
marki_fungi on January 17th, 2013 01:17 am (UTC)
Brilliant work. I love this one and not only because it's been so rare to see Jacob bottom for Edward. I love the ficlet for this one and I love how you've captured their emotions so well.

I do have to say that I agree with your desire to get back to the roots of this series because I did love your initial series especially the concept of the dreams along with their angst and their fighting to make a place in their worlds for each other. I hope you continue along this line.

Keep up the exceptional work because no matter what you do with this fandom I'll love it.
chewableprose on January 17th, 2013 07:18 am (UTC)
Thank you, I love this one too, it's very special for me, it just worked. And yes, I do want to return to the more romantic aspects of this series, so I'm glad to hear you're in support of that (particularly given you've followed this series from the beginning). Thanks for that.
tatummc80 on July 28th, 2013 03:59 am (UTC)
Usually I would rather Edward as the bottom but Jacob takes Edwards Dick like a champ and makes it look so hot!nice job
chewableprose on August 2nd, 2013 06:44 am (UTC)
Thank you. I really appreciate that, especially considering you prefer bottom!Edward. Thanks for the support :).
colej1509 on October 7th, 2013 05:18 pm (UTC)
It's the Best, the most realist and the sexiest ;)
chewableprose on October 8th, 2013 11:57 am (UTC)
Thank you so much. I really appreciate the comment. I've added you, please continue to comment :).
vex47 on October 9th, 2013 12:01 am (UTC)
So hot it's the new background image, I can see why now. :D
chewableprose on October 29th, 2013 12:14 am (UTC)
:) Thanks.
girandzimfan on October 28th, 2013 12:05 am (UTC)
Most definitely one of my favorite manips right now! Good job!
chewableprose on October 29th, 2013 05:47 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, I really you saying that. Glad you enjoyed it.