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20 May 2012 @ 03:19 pm
CHEWYSTORIES Crystal Lake pilgrimage  
 
CRYSTAL LAKE PILGRIMAGE

   CLAY MILLER / TRENT 



CHEWYSTORIES, the mainstay of this journal. Here I couple manips with ficlets to tell an ongoing 
narrative. This has always set chewableprose apart as a place where you can find porn 
accompanied by prose. The result being a more meaningful and believable slash fantasy, enjoy.



Ficlet | Clay Miller was the all-American jock and gentleman. He was tanned and bulk-built, yet loyal and true. He always helped out those in need and hated bullies. Trent was the opposite, a pantomime of private school privilege and sexist prat. He was self-righteous and preyed on those who were different. He cared only about his parents' money and his next lay. When Jason Voorhees set about killing them and those they were with, he stripped them both back to their essence. Clay was much the same, made braver by the challenge and threat of violent death. While Trent crumbled, his layers of pampered privilege giving way to cowardly desperation for self-preservation, abandoning his friends and fleeing into the woods. Clay stayed to try and protect the others, but he couldn't. One by one Jason sliced them off despite his best attempts to keep them breathing. Even his sister died in his arms after trying to escape. When he was all that was left, Clay too fleed into the woods, where he found Trent huddled and quivering in the undergrowth. When Trent saw him, he latched on and wouldn't let go. "Stay with me," he pleaded, "I don't want to die alone." "Why shouldn't you die alone," he replied, "that was the fate you left all your friends to." When Clay pulled away, intent on leaving him, Trent dropped to his knees, trembling. He buried his face in Clay's crotch and whimpered for him to stay. Clay liked seeing him like this, broken. He wanted him to feel afraid, to feel pain. He wanted this, because he knew his kind. He knew how miserable he made others, particularly men like himself. While Clay was gay, he was not typically so. Yet this didn't make him blind to the torment that closet cases like Trent enacted on those who were. This gave him an idea.

"What are you prepared to do for my help?" he said. "Anything," Trent said. Clay grabbed the back of Trent's head and pulled him into his crotch. "Suck it," he said, unzipping his jeans and slapping Trent in the face with his sweaty cock. His eyes red and wet, Trent put the cock in his mouth and worked it like it were a delicious sweet. "You've done this before," Clay said, "you fuckin' fag." He did it to humiliate him, to punish him for being such a douche. Never did he expect to enjoy it so much, to want to save the lips that were giving him so much pleasure. After he shot his load and Trent hungrily licked it all up, he grabbed him by the hair and pulled his head back. "OK here's the deal fag," he said, "I'll save your pathetic ass, on the condition that once I have, it's mine; I get to fuck it any which way I like." "Agreed," Trent said, wiping his face and packing Clay's junk back in his briefs as careful as if it were precious stones, zipping him up and licking his lips. "Being a cock whore agrees with you," Clay said, grabbing his wrist and pulling him further into the woods. Clay kept his side of the bargain, slaying Jason in an abandoned summer camp they came across. And Trent followed through too, making his ass available anytime Clay wished to pound it. Clay found he liked the guy's hole as much as his lips, calling on him often to return to Camp Crystal Lake and show his appreciation by bouncing on his cock. He even came to care for him (beyond his lips and hole) and observed a change in him for the better.     

Notes | A bit non-con, hopefully this didn't offend anyone (it's just fantasy after all). Obviously I took some liberties with the story. Gifs created by quin611. This entry is public as per my new open access policy.

 


Comments are .


CHEWYCOMPETITION: THE GOLDENCHEWY 


The GoldenChewy is an annual prize that reaffirms my commitment to fostering a better comment culture on this journal. It is awarded to the user with the most Best ChewyStories Comment wins in the year.

The user who leaves the best comment on a chewystories post will have the opportunity to request one manip (posted prior to my open access policy) they would like made public. In order to be in the running you must be a chewyresident and have posted your comment on the chewystories entry before I publish a new chewystories post, on which the winner will be announced and invited to choose one manip to make public. If there are no outstanding comments, no winner will be chosen.

On the anniversary of this journal (9 January), the user with the most 'wins' of that year will be invited to request a manip of their very own. Not only will I create a slash manip of your choosing (with any two characters from any fandom you desire), but you will also receive the hi-res file of your manip (and be the only one other than myself who will have it). Hopefully this will encourage more of you to comment more generously. Let the feedback begin.

And the Best ChewyStories Comment for the last chewystories post goes to scooterdamej (tally: 2) for this comment, which was the most detailed and reflected on both the ficlet and the manip. I will say that the quality of comments has improved significantly, I really appreciate it. A few of you came close to winning, so keep up the effort everyone, because the final prize is pretty special.
 
 
 
xenalaoma on May 20th, 2012 05:58 am (UTC)
This pictures is just as epic as the last one thank you.
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:50 am (UTC)
Cheers.
heretick_will on May 20th, 2012 08:24 am (UTC)
well hello there mr.padalecki!

great job friend
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:50 am (UTC)
Thanks Will.
wirrrn on May 20th, 2012 11:15 am (UTC)

Aweeesome! Love this pairing. Ficlet just as good as manip!
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:50 am (UTC)
I know you do, and am glad you enjoyed the ficlet as well.
darlin43 on May 20th, 2012 11:59 am (UTC)
Hey i have to admint that now i don´t have fear to visit crystal lake XD
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:51 am (UTC)
Hehe, good, me either.
strosselmunk on May 20th, 2012 12:29 pm (UTC)
If I was forced into having sex with Jared Padalecki, I would probably look as happy as Travis does.

Superhot fake, love it! :D
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:51 am (UTC)
Me too, thanks for the nice words.
lukasz01 on May 20th, 2012 01:11 pm (UTC)
finally another one with travis
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:51 am (UTC)
Glad you approve.
owensheart on May 20th, 2012 02:15 pm (UTC)
WOW hot pic, the story was sorta a bit sad though a bit hot too.
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:53 am (UTC)
Thanks Rose, yes, there needed to be a bit of sadness to bring these two together.
matt_1215 on May 20th, 2012 03:52 pm (UTC)
I hope you are again many imagination because it's really good and I want to that continu!!!
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:53 am (UTC)
Thanks :).
damaris4 on May 20th, 2012 05:14 pm (UTC)
Love it! Good work!!
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:54 am (UTC)
Thanks Javier.
samwinchester1 on May 20th, 2012 09:32 pm (UTC)
I love the horror themed work! Definitely a great fake and fic :)
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:54 am (UTC)
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
the_dean_team on May 20th, 2012 10:02 pm (UTC)
Super sexy summer camp!
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:56 am (UTC)
Glad you think so.
koshweasley on May 20th, 2012 11:01 pm (UTC)
LMAO - perfect. They look like they're posing for the obligatory camp pictures. Great looking sexy man on sexy man.

And he's still got his boots on :)
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:57 am (UTC)
Hehe, thanks Kosh.
ingrid44 on May 21st, 2012 12:25 am (UTC)
Good story! Today this ficlet is way better than the manip I hate to say. It just doesn't look quite right - but the story! Spot on!!!!
Ever think of writing a story rather than a ficlet? It would be great, I just know it. You captured the essence of both characters perfectly. A longer story would have made good reading!
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 07:57 am (UTC)
Glad you enjoyed the ficlet ... not sure, perhaps one day I'll branch out into full-blown fics.
scooterdamej on May 21st, 2012 02:40 am (UTC)
Smuggy. Smug. Smuggerson. Is Smug
I'd like a Smallville one please: WAREHOUSE CLARK / JASON
Okay on to the Comment.
I love the longer ficlets (would have loved them more back when it was all I could see... Oh Well) I hope you keep up the extended writing.
I found this disturbingly hot (you keep making me love you & hate mysel a little... How do you DO that!?). Can't say enough good stuff about the depth & psychological impact of this story for the characters (& for the reader).
A little less warm & fuzzy on the Manip: Trent's head just looks WEIRD, The coloration & blending work well, So I don't know if it's a size issue or just the angle? Clay's head isn't bad, the slight colour difference could just be a tan on the skin that shows the most but the pale hands kind of argue against that... Too nit-picky?
Trent is ridiculously well-hung (where do you find these guys?) & is there blood on the coat they're having sex on? Nice (twisted) touch!
Hope I haven't shot myself in the foot for the Tri-Fecta but I said I wouldn't Bull-shit you.
Well Done US!
Damej

Edited at 2012-05-21 02:42 am (UTC)
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 08:06 am (UTC)
Re: Smuggy. Smug. Smuggerson. Is Smug
Congrats on your win, I've unlocked that manip, hope you like it.

Glad you're enjoying the longer ficlets, really it just depends on how much backstory/context I feel the manip needs, but you'll probably notice longer and longer ficlets from now on.

Hehe, yes, it was a bit disturbing wasn't it? Glad you still found it hot.

No worries about the manip, each to their own, and I want honesty. Personally I don't see anything wrong with Clay, but can see what you mean about Trent and the angle of his head, did the best I could with what I had.

Glad you enjoyed the ficlet :).
maxwell_555 on May 21st, 2012 01:03 pm (UTC)
I liked Friday the 13th movie, mostly because of Jared's performance, so I loved this post with a twist on the story. It would have been even better if this happened in the movie :P The manip is really great, loved their expressions, Trent's boots and the bright background. Even so, my favorite part of this post was really the ficlet. It was well written and very hot. Even if it was a bit non-con, it was great anyway and it made the ficlet more fitting to Trent's personality and why he would submit to Clay. I hope we see more of them in the future.
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 08:07 am (UTC)
Thanks for your great comment, and am thrilled you enjoyed the ficlet and my new take on the story :).
lee_2006_me on May 22nd, 2012 11:18 am (UTC)
Loved!!
I was losing my hopes from that couple!
Thank you soo much!!!
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 08:08 am (UTC)
You're welcome, glad you enjoyed it.
xenalaoma on May 23rd, 2012 07:54 am (UTC)
Hi thank you form the hot manips.
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 08:08 am (UTC)
No worries :).
romancito on May 23rd, 2012 10:51 am (UTC)
very hot! this movie is just smokin, i mean, jared + outdoor sex!
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 08:08 am (UTC)
Hehe, thanks Roman, glad you enjoyed it.
tomboytoy on May 26th, 2012 12:08 pm (UTC)
This is a really hot story without any doubt and it goes perfectly well with your awesome manip. Gotta admit I've never seen this movie (don't really like those kind of movies (even though I watch one once in a while) cause I always tend to really get into it and to jump everytime something "scary" happen...

Back to the manip, I like all the little details you put into it like the camp sign, the blending here is perfect. Also I gotta say that in this gif of Jared you use, he really looks dreamy ;) Travis Van (T)Winkle is gorgeous and it's always nice to see a manip of me, I find him to be really underrated ;)
chewableprose on May 27th, 2012 01:23 am (UTC)
Thanks Tom, your comment is really reassuring. A few commenters have been quite critical of this manip, but I personally don't think it's that bad (I think it's pretty good), so hearing nice things from you makes me feel much better (especially because I know that you would tell me if you thought the manip was off and because of how much I respect you as an artist).

And yes, I actually think Jared looks the best in this movie, better than he does in anything else, that's really why I like it, for him.

Thanks again *hugs*.
twilight199021 on May 28th, 2012 12:16 pm (UTC)
it's beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!
chewableprose on May 30th, 2012 05:32 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, your icon is so hot *fans self*
twilight199021 on June 4th, 2012 01:16 pm (UTC)
thanks :-) oIo
zdae69 on June 19th, 2012 05:56 am (UTC)
Yet another movie I have yet to watch, bought it on Blu-Ray, but never get around to watching it. (Been so busy I usually only have time for short, 22 minute episodes of shows.) Anyway, even with the fact that I haven't seen the movie, that in no way took away from my enjoyment of the ficlet! I think I've said this before, but I can't stress it enough, I love how your stories are understandable, readable, and enjoyable even if someone is new to a fandom! I really loved this ficlet, it's probably in my top five of yours! One of my favorite sexual scenarios is someone getting their comeuppance through having to be a sex-slave! haha! I really loved how Clay took charge, and used the situation to his advantage! ;) I will definitely have to return to this one after I watch the movie, and I'm sure I will love it even more!

Yet another superb manip, Joe! I really love the tranquility of it! You always get the skin tones to match the lighting of the surrounding area so perfectly! It's uncanny! I mean, so good it's as if it's out of the movie itself! :D




Edited at 2012-06-19 05:57 am (UTC)
chewableprose on June 24th, 2012 09:58 am (UTC)
Nolan, thank you so much, once again, you are so so generous. I particularly appreciate your praise of the ficlet, because I really enjoyed writing this. And yes, when you watch the movie I'm sure you'll have the same impulse as I did (as Trent is a ripe old prick in it). And I totally get the fantasy you have (yet something else we have in common).

And thank you for the positive feedback about the manip ... I was pretty happy with it, and so was surprised by some of the critical feedback it received ... so it's very reassuring to hear nice things from you. Thanks friend *hugs*.
awhitephoenix on February 1st, 2014 07:49 am (UTC)
Wow nice job mate! This looks incredible! :D
fclover_10 on November 1st, 2014 07:50 pm (UTC)
Hot pic. I love Jared. That movie was good too.