?

Log in

No account? Create an account
 
 
06 May 2012 @ 12:28 am
CHEWYSTORIES Trouble in paradise  
 
TROUBLE IN PARADISE

   EDWARD CULLEN / JACOB BLACK 



CHEWYSTORIES, the mainstay of this journal. Here I couple manips with ficlets to tell an ongoing 
narrative. This has always set chewableprose apart as a place where you can find porn 
accompanied by prose. The result being a more meaningful and believable slash fantasy, enjoy.



Ficlet | While the series of naughty honeymoon shots Edward and Jacob had taken around the island when they first arrived were fun and sexy, after being on the island for a few months, Edward was beginning to have serious doubts about his decision to leave Bella and his life in Forks. It was hard enough to have to hear the thoughts of his loved ones and their disappointment in him, but now he was even starting to resent the thoughts of Jacob, who was always thinking of sex, but a sex devoid of intimacy of any kind. This was despite all of Edward's best efforts to make their time away as special as possible, such as moonlight swims and picnics on the beach. But all Jake wanted was to fuck, and not in a 'I love you', kissing while I make love to you kind of way. No, Jake just wanted to pound Edward's tight pale ass with his tanned werewolf-hung cock and a giant puppy dog grin on his face. And while Edward couldn't deny how hot it was (and would moan with intense pleasure as Jacob shot his load inside him), given that he had waited one hundred years for love, he couldn't help wanting for something more meaningful.     

Notes | It's been a while I know, but consider this the reboot of my Twilight series, expect far more frequent updates in this series from now on. Gif was credited by Tumblr artist zephyroh. Remember that entries go public after 75 comments.

 


Click to enlarge, comments are ❤.


NEW RULE 

In an attempt to encourage a better comment culture on this journal (because to be honest, very few of your comments inspire creativity from me) and to give those who can't see my work the opportunity to (while I'm hopeful that the new LJ scrapbook will solve the glitch that is stopping some of my friends from seeing my friends only content, I'm not getting my hopes up), starting from this entry, there is a new rule on this journal:

The user who leaves the best comment on a chewystories post will have the opportunity to request one manip they would like made public. In order to be in the running you must have posted your comment on the chewystories entry before I publish a new chewystories post, on which the winner will be announced and invited to choose one manip to make public. If there are no outstanding comments, no winner will be chosen. Remember, even if you can't see the manip itself, you can still comment on the ficlet (which is usually part of an ongoing narrative) and the teaser image.

For those of you lucky enough to be able to see all of my work, as an added incentive for you to make a greater effort in leaving detailed feedback, on the anniversary of this journal (9 January), the user with the most 'wins' of that year will be invited to request a manip of their very own from any fandom (with a choice of two characters). Hopefully this will encourage more of you to comment more generously. Let the feedback begin.
 
 
Current Mood: hopefulhopeful
 
 
 
scooterdamej on May 5th, 2012 03:01 pm (UTC)
Ohh, Challenge Accepted!
I own this competition! (I expect the hardest part to be choosing 1 Fandom to request).
Ok we begin now...
First off (what I was gonna' write anyway): I 'm happy to see this ficlet up, not only because it's been a while for Twilight, but because I can see we're finally getting into the deeper emotional story of Jacob's characterization (as was promised).
I fully expect it will be worth the wait.
Now the stuff I wouldn't have bothered to type out at 1am BEFORE the competion went up:
I love the gif, it's one of the few where he doesn't just look like a human in contact lenses & body glitter, there's something inherently ALIEN about his look (to me) in this image...again I'm going to site the lighting-effect as the reason for this. The way the golden light streaming down on the top half of his face just seems to stop & become red-ish shadow on the lower half. It's a GREAT analogy for his better nature winning out over his baser instincts as they do for the whole series of books... And as he's struggling with in the story!
Brilliant.
Can't see the pic of course but I'm always looking forward to when I can (probably be MUCH quicker from now on!).
Well Done you
P.S. I'm NOT gonna kiss your arse to win because A: you're good enough not to need me to fake it MOST of the time B: as an artist I'd HATE it if someone did that to me &C: if you needed me to lie to you, I wouldn't WANT the prize anyway!... And I DO!
chewableprose on May 6th, 2012 09:20 am (UTC)
Re: Ohh, Challenge Accepted!
Hehe, let the games begin indeed. Great first comment, it will certainly be a tough act to follow. I appreciate what you said, particularly the "most of the time" comment, because it's true, sometimes manips work and sometimes they don't, and being celebrated for when they do work makes it mean so much more.

As per Edward, yes, it's strange but he looked so much better during the honeymoon scenes than he did pretty much any other time during the film. I guess the sun agreed with him. You better start thinking about which manips you want made public, because I sense many wins ahead for you, and yes, keep your eye on the ultimate prize ;).
owensheart on May 5th, 2012 03:17 pm (UTC)
While the sex is hot I agree that Love is of utmost importance. Edward should put some thought into this. but I do think he should try to make it work with Jacob.

oh and THUDDD what a HOT pic.
chewableprose on May 6th, 2012 09:22 am (UTC)
Thanks Rose, and yes, this represents a significant fork in their paths, and one that is going to make both of them think seriously about the reasons behind them being together. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the comment.
starry_nights88 on May 5th, 2012 04:19 pm (UTC)
First and foremost, I love the ficlet, but that's something you knew from the beginning. Lol. I am, however, shocked at the turn they're taking—not that I expected nothing but sex, sex and more sex. It shows story development and that you're as into these ministories as everyone else. I still think the ficlet adds to the manip (which is fantastic, but I can't go in depth because I know next to nothing about manipping) and visa versa.

Even though I am no longer a part of the Twilight fandom, I will be waiting for the continuations (and, hopefully, a resolution that won't make me pout like the self little fangirl I am) with bated breath!

unrelated note, or maybe related…I guess it depends on how you look at it…

…I finally started watching Supernatural! So, hopefully, I'll remember to leave comments on those manips AND the Merlin ones.
chewableprose on May 6th, 2012 09:31 am (UTC)
Starry, it's so great to hear from you. I must admit I'm still mourning you leaving the Twilight fandom, it feels so lonely without you. I'm glad you're still following my work though. And thank you for your lovely comment, yes, with this manip/ficlet I'm launching into a more serious interrogation of the Edward/Jacob pairing in this series, as both of the boys are forced to ask why they are together.

Thrilled to hear that you've started Supernatural, it's a great show, and Merlin is epic too, be sure to check out my tiles for both of those fandoms, as I have quite a few manips and ficlets for them also.

So great to hear from you again *hugs*.
(no subject) - starry_nights88 on May 7th, 2012 03:27 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - chewableprose on May 13th, 2012 12:57 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - starry_nights88 on May 13th, 2012 07:13 pm (UTC) (Expand)
fran_canovas on May 5th, 2012 04:52 pm (UTC)
I'm Argentinian, I can not read well in English because I speak Spanish, yet what little I can see I love, and I congratulate you on the job. I would like to see more fakes of zac efron .... you're a genius!
chewableprose on May 6th, 2012 09:33 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, you're very kind. Unfortunately I haven't made any Zac Efron manips, but there are plenty of great artists who do, such as zdae69 and demon48180.
darlin43 on May 5th, 2012 06:57 pm (UTC)
Hey i know that i never´ll win because i don´t speak english very well, but i really love you initiative!! And of course, your unbelieve manip!!!
chewableprose on May 6th, 2012 09:36 am (UTC)
Don't be so sure, just do the best you can, it's the effort I appreciate the most. Thanks for your comment.
ingrid44 on May 5th, 2012 07:40 pm (UTC)
Hmm, are we detecting a little restlessness, maybe boredom setting in? In Paradise yet?
Once again the ficlet is just as interesting as the manip. And you even remembered the tattoo on Jake! Even the booklet creation with the 2 pictures! You are a real genius with the manips! Swear each one is better than the last.
Good luck with the competition.
chewableprose on May 6th, 2012 09:38 am (UTC)
Thank you, and what a great comment. I really appreciate it, both your attention to the details in the manip (with the tattoo) and the place in the story, the restlessness in paradise. Keep up the great comments :).
fanpire109 on May 5th, 2012 09:20 pm (UTC)
I can only read the ficlet so I'm going to comment on that AMAZING story. I love how you always go into deatail about how Jake ounds Edward's ass and how he shoots his cum inside of Edward. I think that if you would've written the books then the sesx scenes in the movie would've been more interesting lol
fanpire109 on May 5th, 2012 09:21 pm (UTC)
sex scenes not sesx scenes. Sry
(no subject) - chewableprose on May 6th, 2012 09:41 am (UTC) (Expand)
damaris4 on May 6th, 2012 01:22 am (UTC)
Yes!! thank you for this...I was waiting for a jacob manip, great work as always! ;)
chewableprose on May 6th, 2012 09:42 am (UTC)
Thanks Javier, glad I could please.
natbil on May 6th, 2012 07:47 am (UTC)
Oh I can see you guys have a lot of fun here. Just watch for sunburns on tender skin... You know you can't use your jizz as sunscreen right? LOL!
chewableprose on May 6th, 2012 09:43 am (UTC)
Haha ... a sun smart message, love it. Though do sparkly vampires and werewolves have to worry about the sun? I suppose they do.
nicko_1 on May 6th, 2012 08:04 am (UTC)
Take that Cullen
chewableprose on May 6th, 2012 09:44 am (UTC)
He's certainly taking it :).
xenalaoma on May 6th, 2012 12:01 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much it's EPIC.
chewableprose on May 13th, 2012 12:58 am (UTC)
Cheers.
penhagu on May 7th, 2012 03:09 pm (UTC)
It's obvious the lust on Edward's face.. Satisfaction from Jacob's thick and brown tool!
chewableprose on May 13th, 2012 12:58 am (UTC)
Indeed. Thanks for the comment.
scooterdamej on May 7th, 2012 08:51 pm (UTC)
Public Pic
Technical question: Am I supposed to wait until you choose a winner to let you know which Pic I'd like to make public, OR should I start putting my choice on the bottom of my comments to make it easier on you?
If everyone puts their choice at the bottom, then you could make the pic public & just send a "You Won this week!" notice (not have to back & forth mail the winner to get their "order").
Like this...
Your 1 Dean/Cas Manip please!
Hopeful Me
chewableprose on May 13th, 2012 01:02 am (UTC)
Re: Public Pic
That's a good question. The bottom of this post, which details the new rule, will be on the bottom of every chewystories post from now on, and under that I will post the winner, and then the winner via the comments can advise what post they would like made public. Depending on how fierce the competition is, I can perhaps also have a tally board there so everyone can track how they're going. I'm been holding off on posting my next manip to give people a little more time to comment, but I will be posting it soon, I try not to let more than a week pass between posts.
scooterdamej on May 7th, 2012 08:58 pm (UTC)
Ego?
Did that last one seem too "Cocky"?
(as if there is such a thing on THIS journal)
It was genuinely meant to be a helpful suggestion to make YOUR life easier, NOT to make it look like I'm sure I'll win (because there are a lot of really nice & talented people in this community. I don't presume to know your criteria for the selection process.)
P.S. Sorry for the possible bad spelling here, "Spell-Check" appears to be broken.
P.P.S. God I get loquacious (Wordy) when I'm tired!
W.D.Y.
Me
chewableprose on May 13th, 2012 01:05 am (UTC)
Re: Ego?
Haha, not at all. It means a lot to me that you're engaging with his new rule. I really want to foster a better commenting culture on this journal and it means a lot to me that someone like you (who already leaves fantastic feedback) is so supportive ... winner will be announced soon :).
maxwell_555 on May 8th, 2012 11:24 am (UTC)
As always, the manip is great. Loved Jacob's face and the beach background. As for the ficlet, too bad Edward is not happy. Maybe he could have some fun with other guys, trying to find love and eventually getting back to Jacob.
chewableprose on May 13th, 2012 01:06 am (UTC)
I like the way you think, and I'm thinking along similar lines ... we'll have to see what happens. Thanks for the nice words.
chaddyback on May 9th, 2012 04:50 am (UTC)
its a same edwords fells so emty but i think he loves the full fealing he gets from jacobs big cock as he getting fucked. love the manip edward thinkning how hot but unloving it is and jacob just thinking nearly there that asss is tight
chewableprose on May 13th, 2012 01:07 am (UTC)
Haha, exactly. Loved your wording of the internal dialogue between the pair, it was exactly what I was thinking while making it.
koshweasley on May 13th, 2012 04:41 pm (UTC)
OH, god this is quite orgasmic. Love their expressions.
chewableprose on May 14th, 2012 06:05 am (UTC)
Thanks Kosh, thrilled you think so.
lee_2006_me on May 22nd, 2012 11:14 am (UTC)
Amazing!!!
Thanks
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 08:11 am (UTC)
Cheers.
kevin smith on May 23rd, 2012 03:41 pm (UTC)
i think your idea for the comments is genius and i think your work is marvelous
chewableprose on May 26th, 2012 08:12 am (UTC)
Thanks, I appreciate that.
tomboytoy on May 26th, 2012 11:59 am (UTC)
This one is also a really nice manip. Really love Edward's face but why isn't he sparkling? ;p (Seems out of character not to sparkle ;p Just kidding I guess it must be kind of annoying to work on that part ;)) Beside that great work on the blending, the settings (nice touch with the lanterns also appearing in your other manips) ;)
chewableprose on May 27th, 2012 01:06 am (UTC)
You're absolutely right, he should be sparkling ... probably how lazy BD was with sparkly detail has rubbed off on me, he was on a tropical island only sparkled by the waterfall. Thanks for the nice words and for noticing the lanterns :). Glad you liked this one.
imboredrpanyone on May 26th, 2012 01:54 pm (UTC)
To twinkie
Eddie just seems to be twinked out but that look on Jake's face its amazing. Its like hes thinking about what it felt like. When he slide his brown stout cock inside Eddie's ass and just parted in feeling that warm tightness pull against his cock for the first time. While worried Eddie afraid he might hurt him. In all the hot rage vampire lust. As for as inspiring to. If I was to be honest its your romantic Eddie and Jake poses that I always liked. I been so use to not seeing your porn. I don't really care if I see or not. Because you always pay attention to the detail of there expressions . Which I think you do best out of everyone else. Tama is the only one that ever seen out manip you. But always come back to comment because I feel that you know two people can love like Bella and Edward. O_0 And Snow White am so hyped.
chewableprose on May 27th, 2012 01:08 am (UTC)
Re: To twinkie
That's really nice of you to say, thank you. I do work hard on building romantic chemistry between my two main men and it's so nice to hear that it's appreciated. And I'm looking forward to Snow White too :).
Fuck yea - imboredrpanyone on May 31st, 2012 04:46 am (UTC) (Expand)
Re: Fuck yea - chewableprose on June 10th, 2012 01:09 am (UTC) (Expand)
mrmackaw on May 27th, 2012 05:47 pm (UTC)
Do you have any idea as to why It says I dont have access to this picture on this server on all your pictures?
chewableprose on May 30th, 2012 05:38 am (UTC)
Hi, it's because this is friends only, and while you are a friend, there's an LJ glitch that is preventing my friends from seeing friends only content. This is one of the reasons why I've recently gone public. You can read more about this here:

http://chewableprose.livejournal.com/40219.html#cutid1

This post will go public when it reaches 75 comments, however you should be able to see all my recent and future posts (as they are now public).
Merlin - mrmackaw on August 2nd, 2012 10:36 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: Merlin - chewableprose on August 4th, 2012 03:59 am (UTC) (Expand)
zdae69 on June 19th, 2012 05:07 am (UTC)
Okay! Finally I'm back to commenting! (Hopefully they will work and stay working this time!) :)

REALLY excited that you are booting the Twilight series back up! You're the only artist and fic writer I know of that can do it so flawlessly! To start off I loved the ficlet. Well, not the fact that Jacob wasn't showing Edward any intimacy at all. *smacks Jacob on the nose with newspaper* I'm usually one to side with Jacob, but you've actually pulling me toward Edward's side at the moment. Hopefully Jacob will come around... or Edward will get the love he so much deserves some other way.

The manip is extremely well done! So very hot! I know I say this a lot, but you always choose the perfect facial expressions to go with your narratives; I love Jacob's, as you said, "giant puppy dog grin", and Edward almost expressionless face, with still a hint of enjoyment in! And I think it's safe to say from now on that all of your manips are FLAWLESS! :D

Oh and P.S. - My spell check has quit working, so I apologize for any misspellings. (But I'm not going to mess with fixing that since I have my comments working again. A small price to pay to be able to show my love again! <3)
zdae69 on June 19th, 2012 05:18 am (UTC)
Oh! And when I was scrolling down to leave my comment, I noticed you referred someone that wanted Efron manips to my journal! Thanks so much for that, Joe, it really means a lot to me! <3
(no subject) - chewableprose on June 24th, 2012 09:32 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - chewableprose on June 24th, 2012 09:31 am (UTC) (Expand)
johnjackson86 on October 13th, 2012 03:35 pm (UTC)
I'd really like to be able to see all your fucking hot manips
chewableprose on October 17th, 2012 08:08 am (UTC)
Let me know when you reach 100 comments and I'll friend you.
marki_fungi on January 17th, 2013 12:56 am (UTC)
Hi, love the ficlet on this one. I know the ficlets have been a little short in this fandom for the last few manips but I get that's because you were doing the Chewyboys series which were all awesome by the way.

I love this one especially after the honeymoon pictures I've just seen because it adds depth to the honeymoon plot that you obviously like so much. You've captured your ficlet's emotions and thoughts perfectly in just one picture but still made it clear that Edward doesn't really mind the physical side of their relationship but just wants more to the emotional side.

Looking forward to seeing where this goes with the next few manips.

Keep up the great work.
chewableprose on January 17th, 2013 07:13 am (UTC)
Thank you. I do like the honeymoon plot ... there's something about Isle Esme. Thank you for your kind words and support, yes, this manip signals a return to the ficlets, but I am glad you enjoyed the Chewyboys series.