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12 June 2011 @ 04:50 pm
CHEWYSTORIES Catch her if you can  
Title | Catch her if you can
Author | chewableprose 
Fandom | The Twilight Saga
Pairing | Edward/Jacob
Rating |
Request | By wirrrn with the brief of Edward/Jacob fucking in the climatic tent scene, with Bella discovering them and jumping from the cliff to her death.
Ficlet | Edward hadn’t fed in weeks, he was weak and much paler than usual. Bella’s safety had been his prime priority, set against a backdrop of an army headed Forks’ way. It came too much when, Bella shivering from the high altitude, needed Jacob’s body heat to sleep. Having to watch the bastard naked from the waist up with his girlfriend pressed against his flesh was one thing, but to have to listen to his horny thoughts was a whole other brand of torment. Edward left the tent, deciding it less painful outside. Weak, exhausted, he sat and waited for morning. Edward was so out of it, he put up little resistance when Jacob turned up completely naked and erect and started removing his clothes. Forcing Edward onto all fours, he entered him with a force that at once made him aware of his surroundings, of the morning rising sun, and of the soft shuffle of footsteps and muffled sobs. He looked over to see Bella moving toward the cliff’s edge. Well aware of the situation, Jacob tightened his grip, thrust harder and chuckled as Bella was enveloped by the sun’s rays, catch her if you can big boy.
Disclaimer | this is a work of Photoshop manipulation, the author of this work does not, in any way, profit from the work and all creative rights to the characters belong to their original creator(s)


Ficlet | Edward hadn’t fed in weeks, he was weak and much paler than usual. Bella’s safety had been his prime priority, set against a backdrop of an army headed Forks’ way. It came too much when, Bella shivering from the high altitude, needed Jacob’s body heat to sleep. Having to watch the bastard naked from the waist up with his girlfriend pressed against his flesh was one thing, but to have to listen to his horny thoughts was a whole other brand of torment. Edward left the tent, deciding it less painful outside. Weak, exhausted, he sat and waited for morning. Edward was so out of it, he put up little resistance when Jacob turned up completely naked and erect and started removing his clothes. Forcing Edward onto all fours, he entered him with a force that at once made him aware of his surroundings, of the morning rising sun, and of the soft shuffle of footsteps and muffled sobs. He looked over to see Bella moving toward the cliff’s edge. Well aware of the situation, Jacob tightened his grip, thrust harder and chuckled as Bella was enveloped by the sun’s rays, catch her if you can big boy.
 
 


Click to enlarge, detail below, comments are ❤.

 
 
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zdae69 on June 12th, 2011 07:23 am (UTC)
LOL! Rob/Edward's face is hilarious in a hot way! Love all of the added features in the background! If my manips were 1/4 as amazing as yours I would be a happy man! As usual, unfathomably terrific job!
chewableprose on June 12th, 2011 09:37 am (UTC)
You're too kind, thank you for the support, it's much appreciated. More Edward/Jacob coming your way soon ;). *goes to check out your manip creations*
(no subject) - zdae69 on June 12th, 2011 11:10 am (UTC) (Expand)
bristol_man on June 12th, 2011 08:48 am (UTC)
Very atmospheric, but could we have another with a close-up of the happy couple please?
chewableprose on June 12th, 2011 09:36 am (UTC)
Thanks so much. The file's pretty big, click to enlarge for a close up of the two :).
(no subject) - chewableprose on June 12th, 2011 01:50 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - bristol_man on June 13th, 2011 08:22 am (UTC) (Expand)
wirrrn on June 12th, 2011 10:24 am (UTC)

This is awesome. The story should be up soon-ish :)
wirrrn on June 12th, 2011 10:25 am (UTC)
btw- enlarge not working- just get a stream of technobabble!
(no subject) - kolman8 on June 12th, 2011 10:48 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - chewableprose on June 12th, 2011 01:51 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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kolman8 on June 12th, 2011 10:27 am (UTC)
Jump Bella, jump!
The boys look great as always. One critique: the lighting makes it look like all the light in the world shines from Bella. We know this to be a lie. Bella is insignificant.
But I will let you off because there is hot mansex.

PS That's a nice cliff.
chewableprose on June 12th, 2011 01:18 pm (UTC)
Haha, the idea behind the sun's rays was that Bella's suicide was divine intervention. Glad you enjoyed it :).
(no subject) - kolman8 on June 12th, 2011 03:58 pm (UTC) (Expand)
ps1on1c on June 12th, 2011 10:53 am (UTC)
love roberts expression
chewableprose on June 12th, 2011 01:18 pm (UTC)
Thanks, me too :).
fluttershy on June 12th, 2011 01:23 pm (UTC)
The thing that intrigues me the most about your creations is always the facial expressions. This is especially wonderful now, considering just how much I'm hating Bella for getting in the way of the gay here, both IRL and in the movies.

Easily one of my fav. by you, dear, only second to the Ed/Jake innocent bedroom scene you did awhile back. Thank-you, thank-you, THANK-YOU!
chewableprose on June 12th, 2011 01:45 pm (UTC)
That is so nice of you to say, thank you so much. I'm thrilled you like this, and that you enjoyed the facial expressions, I always put a lot of thought and planning into them. More Jakeward loving soon :).
natasja92 on June 12th, 2011 01:44 pm (UTC)
I like their expressions ^^ Awesome like always ;) Thanks for sharing!

And Bella please do jump, you'll do a lot of people a favor :P
chewableprose on June 12th, 2011 01:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks Natasja, I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Hehe, yeah, I think she should jump also ;).
xiiithotaku on June 12th, 2011 02:00 pm (UTC)
yay, let her die please. on a serious note i like the size and depth of this manip, I also think you did a very good job in making Edward paler than normal.
chewableprose on June 12th, 2011 02:09 pm (UTC)
Thanks for your feedback, it's much appreciated. Thrilled you like the depth and pale detail of Edward. More soon.
yenny2206 on June 12th, 2011 04:11 pm (UTC)
Just as I have always imagen them :)

Great work hon.
chewableprose on June 12th, 2011 04:17 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much, always happy to please. More on the way :).
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chewableprose on June 13th, 2011 02:26 am (UTC)
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the comment. More soon.
tomboytoy on June 13th, 2011 07:10 am (UTC)
Nice manip!! Edward's face is priceless there, so his Jake's that smile seeing that Bella is about to jump ROFL. Also, nice work on the background ^^
chewableprose on June 13th, 2011 07:26 am (UTC)
Thanks Tom, glad you like it, particularly the expressions and background.
chaddyback on June 13th, 2011 07:19 am (UTC)
edwood dosent look so big with jacob takeing him like that. so so hot the background is a work of art on its own
chewableprose on June 13th, 2011 07:27 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, thrilled you like it and that you appreciate the background :).
starry_nights88 on June 13th, 2011 02:42 pm (UTC)
I'd have to give two thumbs up, too bad this isn't how the tent scene really went. ;) lol.
chewableprose on June 14th, 2011 03:54 am (UTC)
Thanks Starry, glad you approve.
heretick_will on June 14th, 2011 07:16 am (UTC)
that's freaking hot, and i don't really dig those two))but that's HAAWWWT)
chewableprose on June 14th, 2011 07:17 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, I appreciate that. Just posted a new Edward/Jacob :).
bristol_man on June 14th, 2011 06:04 pm (UTC)
Sorry to be a pain, especially when you were so obliging as to post the close-up, but I'm still, after many attempts over two days, unable to see more than the top one inch of the close-up. Any suggestions? Can it be re-loaded?
chewableprose on June 15th, 2011 03:25 am (UTC)
No worries at all, I'm just sorry you're having trouble viewing it (am still looking into why that is). If you PM me your email address I'll email you the close up :).
sebfan06 on June 15th, 2011 09:51 am (UTC)
I cant stop laughing at this. How perfect you have combined comedy and sexiness great job!
chewableprose on June 15th, 2011 01:39 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much, glad you found it amusing :). Thanks for the comment.
lee_2006_me on June 18th, 2011 03:38 am (UTC)
Amazing!!!
Thanks
chewableprose on June 18th, 2011 12:20 pm (UTC)
Cheers.
maxwell_555 on June 19th, 2011 08:00 pm (UTC)
Edward's expression is priceless in the manip. I liked the ficlet. With Bella gone, everybody will be happy and Edward and Jacob can spend more "quality" time together :P
chewableprose on June 20th, 2011 03:22 am (UTC)
That's right, everybody wins ;). Glad you enjoyed this and thanks for the comment.
itzy1 on June 22nd, 2011 08:05 am (UTC)
hahaha. what REALLY happened when bella was sleeping. this is definitely a different TENT SCENE. haha. love it. jacob's all about being the dominant one and proving it to everyone and he's definitely proving it to edward! love it. super awesome.
chewableprose on June 22nd, 2011 03:45 pm (UTC)
Haha, yeah, major alpha our Jacob is.
ingrid44 on June 28th, 2011 03:47 am (UTC)
Oh boy, did not expect Jake to be so coldhearted! Though how Edward could have been that weak to allow Jacob to manhandle him? Nah, no way. Subconciously, Edward wanted Jacob!!!

Hot, hot steamy photo!!!
chewableprose on June 28th, 2011 05:20 am (UTC)
Haha, yeah, he is a bit of a meanie here isn't he? Hehe, I agree, Edward was just glad Jake was so forceful, that way he could justify to himself giving into the hotness. Thanks for your support.
scifiguyuk on August 14th, 2011 01:11 am (UTC)
I think I might have a new favourite manip! This is awesome man! Especially like the context! I'm lost for words. :) x
chewableprose on August 14th, 2011 01:26 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, I'm thrilled you like it so much :).
fanpire109 on January 7th, 2012 07:58 am (UTC)
I wish I could know what was goin through Bella's mind when she saw Jake inside of her boyfriend
chewableprose on January 9th, 2012 06:34 am (UTC)
Hehe, me too. Thanks for the comment.
marki_fungi on January 15th, 2013 03:29 am (UTC)
Lovely work. Interesting request. Who hasn't watched that scene and hasn't wished it was Edward that Jacob was keeping warm. (Straight people I guess).

Anyway, brilliant angle to use and I suppose that is one way to get Bella out of Edward's life so that Jacob can have him all to himself.

Keep up the great work.
chewableprose on January 16th, 2013 02:36 am (UTC)
Thank you, this one was tricky actually. Glad you like it.
wttr_speak77 on October 21st, 2013 05:25 pm (UTC)
It must reach 75 comments because it looks hot
chewableprose on October 27th, 2013 09:04 am (UTC)
:)
supahsmith942 on January 3rd, 2014 02:14 am (UTC)
I'd be like "jump bitch, jump!!" Great work, as usual