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09 December 2010 @ 05:08 pm
CHEWYSTORIES Prom kiss  
Prom kiss by chewableproseTitle | Prom kiss
Author | chewableprose 
Fandom | The Twilight Saga
Pairing | Edward/Jacob
Rating |
Spoiler warning | If you haven’t read Breaking Dawn and don’t want to know what happens, don’t read my summary or notes for this manip
Ficlet | As Edward held Jacob firm in his grasp, Jacob’s fear-filled thoughts of the pack outside subsided to peaceful, overdue slumber, which made Edward reminded of what it was he missed most about being alive: the release of dreaming. While with Bella it had been fascinating to watch and imagine what it was that went on inside her head, with Jacob he could see, with Jacob he too could dream, closing his eyes and clamping their bodies together, Jacob transporting them both away to a place not even their guilt could reach them. The first dream was one Jacob had told Edward about, a place without Bella, a night at the prom. Initially Edward watched the dream as if a witness, someone in the wings seeing the fantasy unfold onstage. But, as was the nature of dreaming, soon he too was lost, and the dream his reality.

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Edward waited alone at his senior prom, amazed by Alice’s ability to convince him to attend it, although suspecting that Jasper was in no small part also to blame. Although for years he’d avoided them, this time Alice insisted. “You’ll thank me later,” she said, with her all-knowing grin. Seated outside the venue, a rustle from the woods behind announced a russet-skinned boy, from a nearby reservation no doubt. On account of the boy’s odour, Edward was sure they had met before, he never forgot a scent, particularly one so intoxicating. It was pleasant, even if instinct told him it shouldn’t have been. “Are you Edward Cullen,” the boy said on approach. “I am,” Edward replied. “I’ve been sent to give you a message.” On closer look, Edward recognised him as the son of Billy Black, he remembered him hiding behind his father, many years ago, before he started at Forks High. That he found himself so attracted to the boy’s scent intrigued him, especially given his enemy bloodline. “And what is that message,” Edward said, almost as an afterthought. “We’ll be watching you,” the boy’s laughter betrayed his straight face, Edward sifting through his thoughts, finding it curious that he seemed to know nothing of the message’s significance. Since becoming a vegetarian, Edward had lost interest in his prey, keeping the lives of humans separate from his own to avoid the desire and chase a human’s infatuation with him would evoke, like a cat after a mouse, the will to stop pursuit once begun was near impossible. And yet, Edward said, “Are you crashing?” To which the boy replied, “Yes”. His name was Jacob, a fascinating creature, his attraction to Edward not at all frightening him. He was simple in a good way. And Edward strung him along, because he too felt a simple attraction, which led them away from the crowd, to kiss passionately by the twinkling lights of this night of passage. It was intoxicating, the way the taste of Jacob on his tongue made him forget his bloodlust. Edward had waited so long for such a distraction and already could not imagine existing apart from him.
Disclaimer | this is a work of Photoshop manipulation, the author of this work does not, in any way, profit from the work and all creative rights to the characters belong to their original creator(s)


Robert Pattinson as EdwardFiclet | As Edward held Jacob firm in his grasp, Jacob’s fear-filled thoughts of the pack outside subsided to peaceful, overdue slumber, which made Edward reminded of what it was he missed most about being alive: the release of dreaming. While with Bella it had been fascinating to watch and imagine what it was that went on inside her head, with Jacob he could see, with Jacob he too could dream, closing his eyes and clamping their bodies together, Jacob transporting them both away to a place not even their guilt could reach them. The first dream was one Jacob had told Edward about, a place without Bella, a night at the prom. Initially Edward watched the dream as if a witness, someone in the wings seeing the fantasy unfold onstage. But, as was the nature of dreaming, soon he too was lost, and the dream his reality.

*                    *                    *

Edward waited alone at his senior prom, amazed by Alice’s ability to convince him to attend it, although suspecting that Jasper was in no small part also to blame. Although for years he’d avoided them, this time Alice insisted. “You’ll thank me later,” she said, with her all-knowing grin. Seated outside the venue, a rustle from the woods behind announced a russet-skinned boy, from a nearby reservation no doubt. On account of the boy’s odour, Edward was sure they had met before, he never forgot a scent, particularly one so intoxicating. It was pleasant, even if instinct told him it shouldn’t have been. “Are you Edward Cullen,” the boy said on approach. “I am,” Edward replied. “I’ve been sent to give you a message.” On closer look, Edward recognised him as the son of Billy Black, he remembered him hiding behind his father, many years ago, before he started at Forks High. That he found himself so attracted to the boy’s scent intrigued him, especially given his enemy bloodline. “And what is that message,” Edward said, almost as an afterthought. “We’ll be watching you,” the boy’s laughter betrayed his straight face, Edward sifting through his thoughts, finding it curious that he seemed to know nothing of the message’s significance. Since becoming a vegetarian, Edward had lost interest in his prey, keeping the lives of humans separate from his own to avoid the desire and chase a human’s infatuation with him Taylor Lautner as Jacobwould evoke, like a cat after a mouse, the will to stop pursuit once begun was near impossible. And yet, Edward said, “Are you crashing?” To which the boy replied, “Yes”. His name was Jacob, a fascinating creature, his attraction to Edward not at all frightening him. He was simple in a good way. And Edward strung him along, because he too felt a simple attraction, which led them away from the crowd, to kiss passionately by the twinkling lights of this night of passage. It was intoxicating, the way the taste of Jacob on his tongue made him forget his bloodlust. Edward had waited so long for such a distraction and already could not imagine existing apart from him.

Notes | Sidelining the drama to come — as Bella returns to Forks — this is a chance to explore what might have been had she never moved there. Considering that we have many dreams a night, and that REM sleep is much more common in sleep deprived people, like Jacob, I think this might be a nice opportunity for all those romantic shoulda-coulda-wouldas. It’s also an opportunity for some sexy long-haired Jacob love and angst-free romance (so rare in this fandom). Alice’s vision linking to the destiny of their love. This sideline story will be told over several parts. As is the nature of dreams and our subconscious, you’ll notice a reworking of canonical events (such as, in this case, Jacob’s discussion with Bella at the prom). This entry was cross-posted to jakeward, twilight_slash, rpattz_taycob, twi_cwc and twilightmanips, which is why it is not friends locked. If you’re visiting from one of these communities and you’d like to see more of my manips, comment on my friends only entry, but be warned, much of my work is sexually explicit.

 
 
Prom kiss (detail) by chewableprose

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wirrrn on December 9th, 2010 06:40 am (UTC)

Yummo! Awesome manip, and ficlet as usual. I personally prefer Jacob with shorter hair, because that's when he starts forgoing shirts ;)
chewableprose on December 9th, 2010 07:04 am (UTC)
Thanks Gav, glad you liked it. Each man to his own, I love his long hair myself. But you make a compelling argument with the shirtlessness. Cheers for the comment.
kolman8 on December 9th, 2010 06:53 am (UTC)
In agreeance about the hair ^ and the shirtlessness, but I'm not saying no to boy-kissing. And ass-grabbing.
And I liked the ficlet too, but not as much as the kiss. :P
chewableprose on December 9th, 2010 07:06 am (UTC)
Cheers, am glad you enjoyed the kiss. Thanks for the comment.
agape_eternal on December 9th, 2010 07:21 am (UTC)
Oooh I love this and I love the hair. Long hair Jake is my fave :)
chewableprose on December 9th, 2010 07:33 am (UTC)
Yay, me too *hugs* it makes him so epicly dreamy. Thanks a bunch for the comment :), more long-haired Jake soon.
agape_eternal on December 10th, 2010 09:06 am (UTC)
It does. He should keep the hair lol. You're welcome :)

YAY!
mia_dcwut_09 on December 16th, 2010 06:40 pm (UTC)
where did you get your icon from?
fluttershy on December 9th, 2010 08:33 am (UTC)
OMG.
I just love you. *_* <3
chewableprose on December 9th, 2010 09:46 am (UTC)
*blushes* hehe, thanks so much.
starry_nights88 on December 9th, 2010 10:18 pm (UTC)
I was almost confused. I had thought I missed some manips. Glad to see that I haven't and I love how you managed to work in these diversions.

The manip, as always, is amazing.

I can't wait to see what else you've got planned in this dream diversions~ :)
chewableprose on December 11th, 2010 12:19 am (UTC)
Thanks Starry, I'm glad you found your way in the story and that you like the diversion (I just figured it would be nice to have a parallel narrative that explored the 'what if' scenario, and given Edward's gift, he's perfectly placed to experience it). Much more dream diversions on the way, as always, thanks for the support :).
kradamgasm on December 10th, 2010 02:53 am (UTC)
Hot hot hot manip <333
chewableprose on December 11th, 2010 12:19 am (UTC)
Hehe, excellent, that's what I like to hear. Thanks for the comment.
tomboytoy on December 10th, 2010 09:23 am (UTC)
Great manip (and story). Never been a fan of long har Jacob but he sure looks good there. There are just two tiny things that looks kinda weird to me. First, Edward's head, he seems so in pain there and it's weird since it's a dream and it makes him forget his bloodlust.

Second, Jake's hand on Edward is weird, it looks like Edward's got no butt lol

Despite that, I'm impressed by the way you manage to master the kissing manips ^^
chewableprose on December 11th, 2010 12:29 am (UTC)
Thanks Tom, hehe, Edward looking in pain ... considering that was him kissing Bella, maybe Edward's homosexuality is canon afterall, lol, but I get your point. For me personally I get passionate rather than pain vibes, or perhaps extreme relief at a release from blood lust (which is consistent with a break from Edward's brooding nature), but your feedback is great, it helps refine my own devil's advocate eye when creating the works. Hehe, both Edward and Jacob's bodies I made from scratch, and I spend a while trying to get the proportions right, maybe it doesn't come across like this, but Jacob's left leg is forward and he is pulling Edward's pelvis toward him so that his lower body sort of 'clicks' into place, while Edward arches backward from the waist up ... I just thought it was a more passionate stance, but if that hasn't come across ... then fail, lol. As always, thanks for the feedback, it's very useful.
tomboytoy on December 11th, 2010 10:36 am (UTC)
You did a great job creating their bodies. I didn't get that he was kind of holding Edward's leg, it makes sense now (and it surely is more passionnate that way ;) )

ps: I hope my feedback wasn't too hard on you, I can be blunt sometimes and your work really is great...
chewableprose on December 12th, 2010 06:19 am (UTC)
Yay, I'm glad it makes sense now, and tells me that maybe I should have described their positioning in the ficlet *notes for future reference*. And I love your feedback, and I like that it's blunt, part of respecting somebody is being able to be truthful with them, so I really appreciate your feedback.

Also, that project of yours that I'm contributing to, you'll have that from me in the next couple of days, it's my current project ;).
annikamalfoy on December 11th, 2010 03:29 am (UTC)
Wow! Another Jakeward picture I like. Never thought that would happen. And this story is still interesting to me. You're getting really good at these manips. Are you going to post the entire story somewhere? I'd like to read it all at once. :) Lovely work. Cheers!
chewableprose on December 12th, 2010 06:23 am (UTC)
*blushes* Thanks so much, I'm thrilled. And yes, I will definitely cobble the story's parts together once it's finished and post the complete, illustrated story. But before that, there's still many many more parts untold :). Thanks for the support, more soon.
duchesscarml on December 14th, 2010 02:51 am (UTC)
I loved this! Long hair!Jacob is just too cute! If only the prom had gone something like this! lol I know I would have liked it better! :) Go Jacob! Thumbs up for dreaming a better dance!

Love the manip! Looks almost real...
chewableprose on December 14th, 2010 07:12 am (UTC)
Thanks Duchess, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I agree, I would love to have seen Jacob's dream come true and the prom to have turned out like this in the canon. Am glad you think it looks life-like too. Thanks for the comment, more soon.
mia_dcwut_09 on December 16th, 2010 06:39 pm (UTC)
great mannip as usual
chewableprose on December 17th, 2010 03:52 am (UTC)
Thanks Mia, I'm glad you like it :). More soon.
leoingenue on January 13th, 2011 10:42 pm (UTC)
Get out of my head!
This is so great! Very well done and I love the expression on Pattinson's face.
chewableprose on January 14th, 2011 01:13 am (UTC)
Re: Get out of my head!
Thanks a bunch. Yes, Edward is certainly passionate about kissing Jacob ;P.
duchesscarml on May 29th, 2011 11:24 pm (UTC)
You know, I've been having myself a nice little waltz through your work (which I'm sure you noticed from all the comments..o_O) and I have to say this one is still my absolute favorite! From the mini fic to the picture... so much passion in Edward's face and the simple joy in Jake's. I just can't stop staring...
chewableprose on June 2nd, 2011 11:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, that means a lot, I'm thrilled you liked this one. It took me a while, and is one of my favourites too :).
jasper19 on July 25th, 2012 01:32 am (UTC)
What a furious sexy hot kiss!!! LoL i love the expression on edward's face!! XD
In others words its absolutely great!! :) thanks for share it!!

Edited at 2012-07-25 01:38 am (UTC)
chewableprose on July 26th, 2012 12:55 am (UTC)
Thank you, I like the passion on Edward's face too :).
marki_fungi on January 13th, 2013 10:44 pm (UTC)
Very nice. A good twist on your story and a good reason to play around with Jacob a little. Personally I prefer him with shorter hair after his change but I like that you're experimenting with his image a little.

Keep up the great work.
chewableprose on January 15th, 2013 02:19 am (UTC)
Thanks, I like both myself, I loved him with long hair. Glad you enjoyed this one :).
wttr_speak77 on October 21st, 2013 05:37 pm (UTC)
I wish it was like that in the movie
chewableprose on October 27th, 2013 09:01 am (UTC)
That would be awesome.
supahsmith942 on January 3rd, 2014 01:52 am (UTC)
Awh Jacob's sweet :D