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09 November 2010 @ 11:19 pm
CHEWYSTORIES Lonely reservation  
Lonely reservation by chewableproseTitle | Lonely reservation
Author | chewableprose 
Fandom | The Twilight Saga
Pairing | Edward/Jacob
Rating |
Dedication | tomboytoy, for his ongoing support
Spoiler warning | If you haven’t read Breaking Dawn and don’t want to know what happens, don’t read my summary or notes for this manip
Ficlet | For Edward, the events of the night before — his and Jacob’s frank discussion of their situation — left him feeling uneasy. Not because he’d made his feelings known and wanted to take back the words, but because acknowledging how strongly he felt led to fears of losing Jake — he’d always been somewhat dramatic in that sense. And so with first light he headed off on foot to the treaty line, surprised to find Jacob there waiting, as if expecting him. “What brings you here?” Jacob asked with a lopsided grin. “I could ask of you the same thing,” Edward replied. “I’ve been out here most of the night, couldn’t much sleep, and well, when I smelt you coming, just had to say hello.” When Edward moved to touch him Jacob stopped him with his palm, “we best not, the pack’s close, and besides,” he added with a wink, “I’m having a hard enough time keeping my mind on other things.” “Of course,” Edward said, “the pack’s communal consciousness. I guess I best leave then.” “That’s probably best,” Jacob said as Edward turned and sped away. When he was gone, Jacob’s smile and pretence dropped as the real reason for his restless night returned to him: it can never be. Edward’s restraint surprised him: he managed to stay away most of the day. But as the sky darkened and another night alone seemed more and more likely, he set out again for the reservation. Determined not to rationalise himself out of it, he crashed through the invisible treaty line without slowing. Headed direct at Jacob’s cabin, distant and confused thoughts from other members of the pack rumbled to him through the trees, Jacob’s command for them to back down cutting through them all. Jacob was waiting outside his house, “What’re you doing here?” he said. “Don’t talk,” Edward replied, terrified by what he was about to do, but too determined to second guess it. “Just kiss me,” he said, “everyone else be damned.” Jacob looked unsure, so Edward took it slow, leaning inch-by-inch until he was close enough to taste Jacob on his lips, then said, “May I stay the night with you?”
Disclaimer | this is a work of Photoshop manipulation, the author of this work does not, in any way, profit from the work and all creative rights to the characters belong to their original creator(s)


Taylor Lautner as JacobFiclet | For Edward, the events of the night before — his and Jacob’s frank discussion of their situation — left him feeling uneasy. Not because he’d made his feelings known and wanted to take back the words, but because acknowledging how strongly he felt led to fears of losing Jake — he’d always been somewhat dramatic in that sense. And so with first light he headed off on foot to the treaty line, surprised to find Jacob there waiting, as if expecting him. “What brings you here?” Jacob asked with a lopsided grin. “I could ask of you the same thing,” Edward replied. “I’ve been out here most of the night, couldn’t much sleep, and well, when I smelt you coming, just had to say hello.” When Edward moved to touch him Jacob stopped him with his palm, “we best not, the pack’s close, and besides,” he added with a wink, “I’m having a hard enough time keeping my mind on other things.” “Of course,” Edward said, “the pack’s communal consciousness. I guess I best leave then.” “That’s probably best,” Jacob said as Edward turned and sped away. When he was gone, Jacob’s smile and pretence dropped as the real reason for his restless night returned to him: it can never be. Edward’s restraint surprised him: he managed to stay away most of the day. But as the sky darkened and another night alone seemed more and more likely, he set out again for the reservation. Determined not to rationalise himself out of it,  Taylor Lautner as Jacobhe crashed through the invisible treaty line without slowing. Headed direct at Jacob’s cabin, distant and confused thoughts from other members of the pack rumbled to him through the trees, Jacob’s command for them to back down cutting through them all. Jacob was waiting outside his house, “What’re you doing here?” he said. “Don’t talk,” Edward replied, terrified by what he was about to do, but too determined to second guess it. “Just kiss me,” he said, “everyone else be damned.” Jacob looked unsure, so Edward took it slow, leaning inch-by-inch until he was close enough to taste Jacob on his lips, then said, “May I stay the night with you?”

Notes | So the lion falls for the wolf, and that reckless romantic — that we all so love him for being — in Edward starts to show through as he grabs Jake and the happiness he offers. Hope you enjoyed this part, and a huge thanks must go to tomboytoy who recently created a fabulous Edward/Jacob manip series and dedicated it to me, *hugs*. This entry was cross-posted to jakeward, twilight_slash, rpattz_taycob, twi_cwc and twilightmanips, which is why it is not friends locked. If you’re visiting from one of these communities and you’d like to see more of my manips, comment on my friends only entry, but be warned, much of my work is sexually explicit.

 
 
Lonely reservation by chewableprose
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natasja92 on November 9th, 2010 12:46 pm (UTC)
I love it XD I can't wait to see how the pack reacts to this ^^
chewableprose on November 9th, 2010 12:52 pm (UTC)
Hehe, indeed. Thanks Nat, I'm glad you liked it.
tomboytoy on November 9th, 2010 04:37 pm (UTC)
Oh you're just too sweet Joe *blush*!! Thanks a lot for the dedication, it means a lot, really *hugs*

About the manip itself, I truly love it!! Love the fact that it's Edward going for it. Also their expression there is just perfect, you feel the hesitation from Jacob and the "giving in" from Edward finally accepting it!! The blending is great although the background seems to lack of contras for me compared to the boys but the rest is just incredibly good!!

Can't wait to see what's coming next!! And once again thanks for the dedication ^^
tomboytoy on November 9th, 2010 04:39 pm (UTC)
Wow just saw the full size of the manip. It's really huge !!
chewableprose on November 10th, 2010 01:08 am (UTC)
Haha, yep, it's a big one.
chewableprose on November 10th, 2010 01:07 am (UTC)
My pleasure Tom, I just really appreciate your feedback, you've been there from the beginning, and that means a lot.

I'm glad you like the manip, I know what you mean about the background, I usually like to spotlight the boys, which can be difficult to realistically match with a Folks atmosphere.

Hehe, indeed, this story's just getting started.
wirrrn on November 9th, 2010 05:36 pm (UTC)

Awesome! Glad they're finally buying a clue listening to their hearts!

btw- Dare I ask for another request? I'd love to see an F13TH remake alternate ending Clay/Trent that had the boys triumphing over Jason and getting horizontal to celebrate... ;)
chewableprose on November 10th, 2010 01:11 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, and I'll see what I can do about a horizontal Clay/Trent reunion ;).
every9seconds on November 9th, 2010 06:10 pm (UTC)
That picture came out really good. Nice job!
chewableprose on November 10th, 2010 01:16 am (UTC)
Cheers, thanks for commenting.
madigirl210 on November 9th, 2010 11:34 pm (UTC)
You have no idea how bad I shriek when I see you've posted :)
I don't know how you manage it, but I've always loved your posts more and more as they keep on coming. I absolutely love this part of the story, with Edward being all 'kiss me' in front of the pack more or less. Amazing job with the photo too. Looks very realistic.
chewableprose on November 10th, 2010 01:19 am (UTC)
*blush* and you have no idea how happy it makes me to hear you say that ;)
I'm thrilled you like it, and that it looks realistic. Lots more to come.
madigirl210 on November 10th, 2010 01:20 am (UTC)
Glad it makes you happy!
And YOU have no idea how happy it makes ME to hear you say THAT! I love your manips, and I'll be sad to see them end whenever they do.
chewableprose on November 10th, 2010 05:47 am (UTC)
Well as long as there's people like yourself interested in seeing my work, I promise to keep creating :).
mia_dcwut_09 on November 10th, 2010 02:45 am (UTC)
omg i waso waiting to see the pack in the background
lol
love this
as always great work and can't wait for more
chewableprose on November 10th, 2010 05:39 am (UTC)
Haha, they're close by.

Thanks Mia, glad you liked it, more soon.
mia_dcwut_09 on November 10th, 2010 06:31 am (UTC)
ill be waiting for the epicness
annikamalfoy on November 10th, 2010 05:28 am (UTC)
While I don't 'ship Jake & Edward this story/manip thingy you got going has me interested. This one is the one I like best. Cheers!
chewableprose on November 10th, 2010 05:43 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, I really appreciate that, especially considering Jakeward isn't usually your thing. Out of interest, what pairings are you in to? More on the way.
annikamalfoy on November 10th, 2010 08:30 pm (UTC)
You're welcome.

Well, Jaspella is my OTP and I also like Jakella and Rosalie/Emmett a lot. I don't particularly care for Edward overall. --ducks flying objects--

Cool. I look forward to reading/seeing it. Cheers!
chewableprose on November 10th, 2010 10:54 pm (UTC)
Awesome, Jasper's very nice. Thanks again for commenting.
mcvelvetkitten on November 10th, 2010 04:48 pm (UTC)
srsly hot!
chewableprose on November 10th, 2010 10:55 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much, glad you think so :).
starry_nights88 on November 18th, 2010 04:53 am (UTC)
Sorry it took me so long to comment. Busy babysitting. x.x

Buy, yes, it's great...

Once again...love the progression and the intensity in the summary. I love that Edward was the one that broke. Normally he so...controlled. It's amazing to see Edward's control breaking and finally seeing him giving into his desires...

He's more...human that way. More belivable as a person, which I think is where the canon failed.

I can't wait to read/see more. :)
chewableprose on November 18th, 2010 09:15 am (UTC)
No worries about the delay, I'm so grateful for your feedback. And I agree, IMO Edward had to be the one to give in, while Jacob started it, it's really a story about Edward and how you can't stop love (no matter the consequences).

I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story, the next part will be up very soon :).
handsomeppants on November 18th, 2010 11:47 am (UTC)
I'm not much of a Twilight fan (although I can still appreciate the boys), but this is very well put together. This shit looks almost real! Great job.

...Also, it would be cool to see something a little bit more ...risque involving these two at some point in the future, haha.
chewableprose on November 18th, 2010 11:57 am (UTC)
I appreciate the feedback, especially considering it's not really your fandom. And to say it almost looks real, thanks so much :).

As per NC-17 Jakeward love, watch this space, this series is headed that way ;).
handsomeppants on November 18th, 2010 12:40 pm (UTC)
No problem. And eagerly anticipating the NC-17 Jakeward love :P.
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chewableprose on November 29th, 2010 08:04 am (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback :).
duchesscarml on December 6th, 2010 03:42 pm (UTC)
And I'm back! And I'm still loving this! I haven't read a picture book in ages. now I remember why I loved them. :) You are amazing! You've won a fan for life!
chewableprose on December 6th, 2010 10:42 pm (UTC)
Wow Duchess, thank you so much. I really appreciate the support, and am thrilled you're enjoying the picture book story so far. Lots more on the way.
leoingenue on January 13th, 2011 10:46 pm (UTC)
This is so cute. I love that Lautner (Black) keeps his eyes open.
chewableprose on January 14th, 2011 01:19 am (UTC)
Me too, I like Jacob's initial trepidation (as shown here), which will soon give way to whole-bodied engagement ;p.
imboredrpanyone on June 21st, 2011 04:46 am (UTC)
opps I did it again.
I just caught something your with tomboytoy aren't fuck me up the ass running am falling for couple. I done this on my social networking sites then I can count. Man shit now am feeling stupid but i love how yall make yall's little gif's
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chewableprose on December 18th, 2011 02:51 am (UTC)
Am glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the comment.
famekills1 on April 29th, 2012 12:24 pm (UTC)
Really hot, I wonder how bella would react?
chewableprose on May 5th, 2012 11:13 am (UTC)
Thanks.
marki_fungi on January 13th, 2013 10:14 pm (UTC)
Particularly like Edward in this manip but in all it's great. Love the background and you've gotta love the ficlet. Finally they've decided to just go with it and let the pieces fall where they may.

Looking forward to checking out where this goes next.

Keep it up.
chewableprose on January 15th, 2013 02:15 am (UTC)
Thank you, yes, he looks great. And this manip was a bit of a turning point for them.
wttr_speak77 on October 21st, 2013 05:38 pm (UTC)
They're meant to be together
chewableprose on October 27th, 2013 09:01 am (UTC)
Agreed.